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| Wikimedia After-the-Rains Florence Peel |
rain quenches thirstiness
fill thy cup
fill thy cup
drink
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weeping willow moist tears
cry no more
cry no more
peace
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beyond the waterfall
dreams take root
dreams take root
growth
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around the river bend
current swift
current swift
calm
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dancing free in the rain
spirits soar
spirits soar
joy
posted for dVerse Kelvin has us writing
Tilus his own form
6-3-1
Can turn things around and make what you want found. Like the willow reference too and the waterfall at your zoo. Bring a little joy, maybe with a foam toy? lol
ReplyDelete#1 twice in a row
DeleteHere at your show
#1 once again at my hall
Deletewriting thoughts on my wall
oh wait a whack just for you
as you run in your shoes
Just my shoes?
DeleteI guess I lose lol or win
lose or win
Deletehmm depends on the spin..
well done, esp like 3rd and 5th
ReplyDeletethank you so much..
DeleteLove the set and my favorites are the last two ~ The form comes naturally to you ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace, I enjoyed writing to this new form.
DeleteI enjoyed these Truedessa. Many were borne out of rain, which we have had a lot of too here too. I cannot choose a favorite, as they each resonate.
ReplyDeleteMary,
DeleteSo nice to see you back. It rained here yesterday and more is expected today.
smiles...i like dancing in the rain...there is a freedom there...its pouring down here...so you might get beat up a bit...ha...but maybe on the other side fo that waterfall is peace...
ReplyDeleteBrian,
DeleteI agree there is something magical about dancing in the rain. It is still raining here this morning.
Weeping willow....cry no more....beautiful poetic gems, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteSherry,
DeleteThanks the weeping willow is my favorite tree and I identify with it on so many levels.
Enjoyed these, Truedessa. I like the idea of dancing in the rain, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Victoria..dancing in the rain a sense of freedom..
DeleteJust love it:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteYou did some nice things thematically with the rain, while creating within the Tilus form admirably. 3 & 5 hooked me hardest; never so no to joy, or an offer to have rain as a dance partner.
ReplyDeleteThanks Glenn smiling at your response..behind the waterfall dreams take root..I'm all for dream exploration.
Deletesmiles... love the one with the waterfall esp... and last week i got soaking wet during a lunchbreak walk - and so soaking wet that i left puddles on the floor when i came back to the office - luckily i had some dry clothes in my locker
ReplyDeletehaha - Fun to dance in the rain but, not when you have to go back
Deleteto work. You are lucky you had dry clothes. I have had to sit at work wet a time or two.
Love this happy wet sequence! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary..
Deletelove these little pieces of happiness...
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed some happiness...
DeleteJoyful, meditative, lyrical, an explosion of feeling and colour!
ReplyDeleteThank you Marina this prompt was fun...
DeleteAn interesting form here Truedessa. I love it. I may give this a try someday :)
ReplyDeleteKelvin created the form for the writing challenge it was fun to write. If you decide to try don't forget to share so I can read it.
DeleteI feel refreshed just reading it!
ReplyDeleteAlex, I am smiling the rain can make one feel alive..
DeleteI really like the image of calmness around the river bend.. to me it can have a higher spiritual interpretation .. not being afraid of what the future brings.
ReplyDeleteHi Bjorn, it's about traveling the river in life facing what is ahead. I think you had good insight.
DeleteThese are all lovely. They all have a very joyful quality to them.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for visiting and leaving a comment.
DeleteBeautiful sets of Tilus, Truedesa. The positive atmosphere shines through the setting you create and who wouldn't be tempted to dance in the rain? I really like your takes my friend. Thank you & oh, it's been a while.. smiles..
ReplyDeleteKelvin thank you for the creative form they were fun to write and I am so glad to see you again my friend.
DeleteI like how you defined the abstract concept with your words. :-)
ReplyDeleteTrue to nature Truedessa! Wonderful set! Tilus is so 'friendly' that one is not enough. Many seems to agree!
ReplyDeleteHank
Hi Hank,
DeleteIt was a fun form and easy to let the mind run with thoughts.
each pulled me into the next, I was hoping they would not ever stop - love it when words carry me away.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words.
DeleteAh, here, reading this really fills my cup. Very nice, heart warming micro poetry. Long live Tulus.
ReplyDeleteI agree the form was so much fun. Wish I had more to offer a refill. Have a wonderful day.
DeleteI actually taught my nephew (well, the closest to it I have) to dance in the rain during a thunderstorm last year... He thought I was pretty crazy! *grin* Love, love, love the last Tilus!
ReplyDeleteThank you..there is something magical about dancing in the rain..crazy can be a good thing..enjoy those moments.
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