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| image by Martin Stranka |
suspended in stillness
deep
thoughts
of you
the only sound echoes of my heart beat
drifting between realms a world for two
flickering memories swift rush of heat
twilight hovers beyond curtains of night
during blue hour, dreams fill an orange sky
celestial heaven bursting gold starlight
to truly see beauty open your eyes
branded with longing warm fire of desire
come join me under the radiant moon
tonight let us dance upon the high wire
our bodies sway to their own special tune
whispering secrets into waiting ears
magical words that only we can hear
the only sound echoes of my heart beat
drifting between realms a world for two
flickering memories swift rush of heat
twilight hovers beyond curtains of night
during blue hour, dreams fill an orange sky
celestial heaven bursting gold starlight
to truly see beauty open your eyes
branded with longing warm fire of desire
come join me under the radiant moon
tonight let us dance upon the high wire
our bodies sway to their own special tune
whispering secrets into waiting ears
magical words that only we can hear
posted for the Mag219
Those magic words can cause me to stray, into the gutter I just may play lol plus the moon brings out the loon, or so they say, perfect capture at your bay. And didn't even need itchy hay haha
ReplyDeleteWell it is a full moon
Deleteso tonight I might swoon haha
and look you are number one
under my sun..
I guess the full moon makes me act like Hank, #1 lol
Deletehaha, Hank was on a #1 streak at your show until Keith slipped in there one morning and claimed #1. Now, Hank is starting over..:)
DeleteI love your creation for this challenge. I was with out words for this. You handled the challenge well enough for the two of us.
ReplyDeleteHi Gail,
DeleteThank you for your kind words and know I have a craving for dandelions and vinegar.
SO beautiful - it was a SPECTACULAR moon last night, with orange haze......I howled alone, hee hee. I especially love "to truly see beauty open your eyes". YES!
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry, the moon was spectacular..I am sure there were others out there howling with you..hee hee..hope you are feeling well my friend.
DeleteLove is the elixir for this soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletebeautifully said..thank you for the visit..
DeleteVery sexy flow to your words.
ReplyDeleteAnd bummer, I missed the moon last night.
Good Morning Alex,
DeleteI always take a moment to gaze upon the full moon so beautiful as it lights the night sky. Maybe, you can catch a glimpse tonight.
Truedessa I can sense some true love in these words. This is filled with beautiful sensuality and romanticism. An awesome combination. Very emotive. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Keith,
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words.
what a beautiful invitation to dance and be together under the light of the moon....and whisper words only you understand...deliciously intimate...
ReplyDeleteBrian,
DeleteThanks so much for your support..I always enjoy reading your responses.
I like the sensuality in this, the beauty of the words connecting love and nature, lovers communicating their own language.
ReplyDeleteMyrna, thank you so much for your comment. I always appreciate your visits.
DeleteI like the notion of night having curtains...lovely...
ReplyDeleteThanks Tess, I really enjoy these prompts of yours..
DeleteI've read your poem several times now. The sound of it touches me deeply. I love the moon. I've always loved sharing my stories with it. Sharing those special moments under the moon light with my loved one is one of the most amazing experiences and you captured it perfectly.
ReplyDeleteBeate,
DeleteThank you for such a heartfelt comment. I am glad I could capture a moment.
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteNew follower.
Thank you Wendy for visiting and following.
DeleteSuch a beautiful write... tantalisingly romantic! Loved it, lots!
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