Thursday, October 16, 2014

Dragon



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dreams of a dragon's song
dancing in the  night  sky
diamonds  gleam above 
duet song of two hearts
doors  open distant  realm
deeper in  tune  we sing
discovering beauty



Writing Pleiades at dVerse
hosted by Vandana Sharma
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61 comments:

  1. Carrie Van HornOctober 16, 2014

    A beautiful dream a beautiful poem, and a beautiful photo at the top. This is lovely Truedessa. :-)

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughOctober 16, 2014

    Truedessa, if you only knew how much that touches on my next story...

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    1. TruedessaOctober 16, 2014

      Alex,

      Perhaps, some synchronicity came into play..I look forward to reading your next story.

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  3. enthusiastically, dawnOctober 16, 2014

    Very mystical, and absolutely dream like...

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    1. TruedessaOctober 16, 2014

      Dragons are mystical as they soar the heavens..

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  4. GraceOctober 16, 2014

    What a beautiful duet of a dragon song ~ Lovely response to the prompt Truedessa ~

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    1. TruedessaOctober 16, 2014

      Thanks Grace, this was an interesting form.

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  5. RaivenneOctober 16, 2014

    A lovely ethereal, cosmic tone to this, very nice.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 16, 2014

      Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Have a great evening.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 16, 2014

    i like the concept of dragon song.

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  7. Brian MillerOctober 16, 2014

    hey i would love to hear a dragon's song...
    it adds another level of magic to this...
    sing on to that duet...smiles.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 16, 2014

      A Dragon's Song..a work in progress..

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  8. Pat HattOctober 16, 2014

    Doors to a distant realm are sure nice ones to push open, awesome pic too. let the dragon sing

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    1. TruedessaOctober 16, 2014

      Push the doors open one never knows what will appear..

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  9. MaryOctober 16, 2014

    What a magical poem you have created here, Truedessa. Lovely imagery.

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  10. Arlee BirdOctober 16, 2014

    Dreams take us to places beyond our imaginations.

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Dreams do indeed take us to those special places..thanks for visiting.

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  11. AnonymousOctober 16, 2014

    big dragon fan here, so I'd love to hear the song. But maybe the dragon's song is the challenges we face in life.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      The Dragon's song could be about overcoming challenges..

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  12. VictoriaOctober 16, 2014

    Ethereal, lovely verse, Truedessa.

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  13. Kathy ReedOctober 17, 2014

    The first poem using letter 'd'...and I love its singing voice.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      The first one isn't a bad thing..D for daring I guess..

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  14. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 17, 2014

    Oh this is beautiful, and the image you chose is really cool, too.

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  15. brudbergOctober 17, 2014

    Dreaming of a dragon's song. Love they words and how they combine into a story.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Dreaming of a dragon's song..I am sure the dragon has a story to tell.

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  16. Sumana RoyOctober 17, 2014

    duet song of two hearts under the diamond-gleam Is the dream stuff...beautiful Trudessa...

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  17. Arathi HariharOctober 17, 2014

    loved the dragon duet..it's just wonderful

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  18. Vandana SharmaOctober 17, 2014

    The song of a dragon heart portrayed beautifully. Thank you so much.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Thank you for hosting. I enjoyed the prompt :)

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  19. SusanOctober 17, 2014

    Oh, I would certainly sing having seen this hint of a dragon. A lovely song.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Thank you Susan..a sight to behold I am sure...

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  20. WolfsrosebudOctober 17, 2014

    "d's" worked well here... gave it a strong feel

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  21. Ginny BrannanOctober 17, 2014

    There's something so ancient and mystical about dragons. Your words have captured the magic!

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Dragons are mystical and magical to capture a small bit is amazing..

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  22. HannahOctober 17, 2014

    You had me at "dragon song!"

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Well, I am glad you came over to read..Thanks..

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  23. AnonymousOctober 17, 2014

    Love the first line.

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  24. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 17, 2014

    Delectable!

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  25. Justin LambOctober 17, 2014

    You combined a common emotion, love, with mysterious creatures and it's worded nicely. Well done.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 17, 2014

      Thanks for visiting Justin and welcome..

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  26. kaykualaOctober 18, 2014

    dreams of a dragon's song
    dancing in the night sky
    diamonds gleam above

    Amazingly movements in the sky can evoke great pictures in the minds Wonderful wrire Truedessa!

    Hank

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  27. humbirdOctober 18, 2014

    So nice about dreams! Sounds like beginning of the fairy tale. Love the title, the hint of two hearts...

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  28. Rawknrobyn.blogspot.comOctober 19, 2014

    This is so concise yet rich with beauty.
    Very nice, Truedessa.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 19, 2014

      Hi Robyn,

      This was a writing challenge at dVerse we were asked to write a 7 line poem with a one word title. Each of the seven lines had to start with the first letter of the title and each line had to be six syllables. So, concise it had to be..thanks for visiting nice to see you here :)

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  29. AnonymousOctober 19, 2014

    Groovy piece. Love the last two lines.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 21, 2014

      Thanks for visiting and leaving a note..

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  30. AnonymousOctober 19, 2014

    This is enchanting. Well done. :-)

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  31. Glenn ButtkusOctober 20, 2014

    Wow, you really got some great responses with this one; thanks for stopping by my site; your pleaides truly sings; nice take on the prompt.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 21, 2014

      Hi Glenn,

      Thanks for coming over for a visit. I always enjoy reading your work especially love those stories.

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  32. A Beer for the ShowerOctober 23, 2014

    I love the use of alliteration. Really enhances the beauty of an already mesmerizing poem.

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    1. TruedessaOctober 23, 2014

      Thanks guys, still laughing over the "Great Post" comment..we need one of those shirts.

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  33. Blue GrumpsterOctober 25, 2014

    Mysterious like you.

    But am I the only one whose afraid of dragons?

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    1. TruedessaOctober 25, 2014

      Mysterious who me?

      Well, some dragons can be scary depends on how you view them. It's about perception.

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