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If I were the sun I would brighten your
days
If I were the moon I would lighten your
nights
If
I were the stars I would make your wishes come true
If I were the heavens I would hear your silent
prayers
If I were the weeping willow I would cry
, so you wouldn't
If I were the earth, I would give you a world of hope
If I were the clouds, I would carry your
darkest days
If I were the rain, I would wash away your pain
If I were the ocean I would be a current
of change
If I were the wind I would listen to
your whispers
If I were the fire, I would ignite your inner
desires
If I were the shadows, I would always walk with light
If I were the seeds of love, I would help you grow
If I were the rose, I would give you my heart
posted for Poetry Jam writing If I Were Poetry
Very uplifting to read ~ I specially love this part:
ReplyDeletef I were the weeping willow I would cry , so you wouldn't~
Grace
DeleteThanks I do associate myself with a willow ..
This is very good, Truedessa! I like how you linked Nature to the loved one. I also think the best line is the one Grace likes.
ReplyDeleteI thank you Gabriella, this one just came from that spot inside of me.
Deleteand the right person, can do all those things...
ReplyDeletejust being themselves....smiles
and that weeping willow line is really good...smiles.
Always good to see you Brian..smiling back at you..
DeleteBeautiful dedication for a lover and shows whole soul surrender.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting.
DeleteTruedessa, I think this is one of my favorite poems of yours. Very touching really. The last stanza is lovely. I really like "If I were the rose, I would give you my heart." Now THAT really moves me.
ReplyDeleteMary,
DeleteYour kindness and support of my writing is very much appreciated and if I haven't said thank you, thank you!
That was really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex!
DeleteBeautiful:))
ReplyDeletethis is a beautiful poem of self effacing dedication...all the lines are very touching....
ReplyDeleteAgain I thank you for your visiting and leaving a comment. It means a lot to me.
DeleteGreat weeping willow line indeed, all coming to be at ones feed. The forces of nature can sure endure and allow one to create a rather fine allure haha
ReplyDeleteThe forces of nature can be powerful and beautiful..
DeleteThis is really beautiful. One of my faves, too. Love the weeping willow, and the heart and rose especially.
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend..I hope you are well..
DeleteThis is really wonderful. i love the way you just melt the heart with your words. I Loved this.
ReplyDeleteThis just came from the heart, I'm glad you could feel the words..
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem. So much love and caring. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Peggy...hope you have a nice weekend.
DeleteBut you are all of that. Close your eyes and you will see I'm right this time.
ReplyDeleteBlue, That is such a beautiful thing to say..thank you from the bottom of my heart..
Deletebeautiful lines..very touching poem..
ReplyDeleteTo be everything to one person is very special indeed
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