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broken
dreams split in two
patching hearts work of art
mending tattered pieces of hope
healing
dreams split in two
patching hearts work of art
mending tattered pieces of hope
healing
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damaged
needing repair
take me to the mountain
restoring faith in life's journey
revived
posted for Poetry Jam
2 cinquains
needing repair
take me to the mountain
restoring faith in life's journey
revived
posted for Poetry Jam
2 cinquains
Awesome with the mountains in view. Lots of great fragments there too. Home to the mountain where the soul is restored. A little patch and mend can stave off the end.
ReplyDeleteHi Pat, Awesome indeed wish you could see it..
DeleteYou know, I do think that mountains can work miracles. I think when one is in the mountains one can reflect on life's problems and they would all be so insignificant. I enjoyed both of your cinquains, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, I agree there is a sense of renewal.
DeleteYou are right, for some reason some places are the perfect locations to find shelter and heal when one is broken. Beautiful photo, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabriella, I took this pic on my last trip to the mountain.
Deletetake me to the mountain...there is a beautiful song a friend of mine wrote with that line...sometimes that journey is needed to reach healing....
ReplyDeleteHi Brian,
DeleteI'd like to hear that song I am sure it is beautiful.
So sad...
ReplyDeleteThis wasn't in my Feedly. No idea why...
Writing broken poems always makes one feel sad and reflective. I am not sure why I don't show..I guess I am thin like a ghost..
DeleteExcellent. Getting out and into nature resets a person in so many ways.
ReplyDeleteIt certainly restores some balance.
DeleteOh yes, the mountains do it every time... beach, too.
ReplyDeleteLaurie, so agree if not the mountains in the spring and fall..you could find me at a beach in the Summer enjoying the magic of the surf.
DeleteOh the cinquain, i haven't used that form in a while, both your poems .ar lovely, but i prefer the healing of the mountains more, reading that one made me sigh a relaxing sigh, Nice
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping over at my blog
Much love...
I prefer the healing of the mountains as well. A sense of calm and peace seems to be in the air.
Deleteawesome lines, beautiful
ReplyDeleteWoolen Socks
Thank you! Have a great day..
DeleteThis is beautiful Truedessa. The faith can always be restored...
ReplyDeleteThe beauty of faith..
DeleteWe all need to journey to the mountain. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLet's hire a bus and we can all go...
DeleteShort and sweet but very meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThank you...
Deleterestoring faith in
ReplyDeletelife's journey revived
One must lead it to happen. But faith has a way of making it happen if one wills it with vigor. Great lines Truedessa!
Hank
Human will is an amazing thing..the power to overcome..
DeleteNature is always so vast, fresh and healing and always there for us...we only need to turn to Her for that magic touch...a beautiful reminder Truedessa...
ReplyDeleteThank you..enjoying those moments of one with nature..
DeleteWell done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gail, How are you?
DeleteLove how you bring it home.
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
ComfortSpiral
=^..^= . <3
Thank you!
DeleteI liked both your poems and a wonderful photo as well. The mountains can indeed be so healing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Peggy so kind of you to visit.
Deletea restoring of faith...how hopeful to find that in the ash of brokenness! lovely!
ReplyDeleteEven in brokenness faith can conquer..
DeleteI like the idea of going to the mountains for healing Truedessa ~ The gift of nature I would like to have in my everyday city life ~
ReplyDeleteWell, it is nice to take a mini vacation from city life and enjoy the mountains.
DeleteTwo lovely cinquains. I have not tried this form - but you've inspired me to give it a go, one of these days. " take me to the mountain" - perfect. Everyone needs a go to place to repair themselves.
ReplyDeleteSometimes I enjoy writing a cinquain or two and I was inspired to write about the mountain. Thanks for visiting.
DeleteI really enjoy reading and writing in this form ~. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen..
DeleteThe breaking and the mending....beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry! How are you my friend?
DeleteTake me to the mountain!
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
ComfortSpiral
=^..^= . <3
Where the air is crisp and clear :)
DeleteNo beach around here, but plenty of beautiful mountains, and those always restore me. Especially when my writing mojo is low.
ReplyDeleteI agree something restorative about the view.
DeleteSo far I've been unable to restore faith in life's journey. But I'm blue... What do you expect?
ReplyDeleteWell you may be blue, but you are an extra-ordinary shade of blue much like myself.
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