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| I wanna hold your hand by Josep Ma. Roselldd |
my
hands lightly linger...
to
feel the splendor of you
eyes
closed I trace your face
pausing
to inhale your scent
lost
in the moment of discovery
my
hands gently tremble
to
feel your heart beat with mine
eyes
open I gaze into your soul
pausing
to inhale a breath of life
finding
my way in flickering light
my
hands take hold of yours
to
feel the warmth of your being
eyes
blazing in a midnight fire
pausing, I part my waiting lips
found
within the hands of time
posted for Poetry Jam
I might have to light a fire tonight and get naked in front of it with my wife...
ReplyDeleteCrap, was that an appropriate response?
haha - laughing at the response
Deletewill let those flames burn long into the night..
I really like "eyes blazing in a midnight fire". A warm poem of love.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry..warm hands, warm heart I am not sure who said that, but I think it applies here.
Deletelmao, the ninja wannabe sure got going.
ReplyDeleteA moment like that is sure one that you want to remain in and have linger and linger, with each grasping finger.
Lmao - His wife better beware as he ignites..
DeleteThat is true..linger in the moment for as long as possible,,,
This is just beautiful, Truedessa. So much emotion in this poem. The touch of the human hand can convey so very much.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary so kind of you ...
DeleteWarm, romantic and beautiful words. Loving is another thing our hands can do.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabriella hands are good for expressing love..
DeleteVery sensual poem...warm expression of love x
ReplyDeleteThanks Humbird..always nice to see you here..
DeleteLoved the poem. Emotional and romantic... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteRomantic and sensual Truedessa ~
ReplyDeletethank you Grace..
DeleteDipped in love and beautiful emotions
ReplyDeleteDipped in love I like that...
Deleteeyes blazing in a midnight fire
ReplyDeletepausing, I part my waiting lips
found within the hands of time
Love the logical development and the subsequent finality in the verse. All the more when emotions exceed the expected. Wonderful write Truedessa!
Hank
Thanks Hank..sometimes logical develops into something magical
Deleteoh nice... there's so much warmth and intimacy in the touch of the hands here... beautifully done..
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia,
DeleteThanks so much visiting..I haven't been around much as I have been a bit ill.
Beautiful. I especially like the 2nd stanza!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie..I enjoyed this prompt..
DeleteLots of emotion expressed by these hands. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteHi Peggy,
DeleteThanks for visiting..I enjoyed the prompt..
When I read the first two stanzas I was picturing a mother and her newborn...then I read the ending and took another glance at the picture and realized how deep both loves must be, though different.
ReplyDeleteHi Donna,
DeleteI there are many forms of deep love depending on the relationship. Thanks for visiting.
Emotions well expressed. Great work.
ReplyDeleteThank you..
Delete... such a beautiful, romantic mood. Well done!
ReplyDeletethank you..
Deletenice..you found quite a few ways to work the hands in there...i find hands quite evocative...they tell a story about who we are...both in their appearance...and how we put them to use...
ReplyDeleteHi Brian,
DeleteI am not sure how I missed this comment. Thank you my friend for visiting. Hands have the ability to say so much..
So romantic :)
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