Tuesday, January 6, 2015

Saving Space for Life on Floppy Disks

artwork by Nick Gentry


we dance
 timeless  beauty
reloading  our  moments
interfacing a click  away 
merging
~
 captured
 arms   embracing 
freeing  space  in  our  hearts
 film  clips precious memories saved
 forever

posted for dVerse writing to the artwork
of Nick Gentry hosted by Grace


47 comments:

  1. How interesting, I don't think I have seen this artwork ~ I like the cyber interfacing in the first part, and the arms embracing, which for me speaks of making it a reality ~ Sweet response, thank you Truedessa ~ Happy New Year ~

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    1. Hi Grace,

      Thanks for hosting! I couldn't decide which artwork to use then I saw that one and it just jumped out at me.

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  2. Nice! You put a less bleak view of the art -- instead, we have valued memories, timeless beauty and embrace. Loved it.

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    1. Well, I guess I just prefer to see light. Thanks!

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  3. Wonderful imagery, perfectly captured in your words.

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    1. Thanks Ginny, this was an interesting prompt.

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  4. It is good to infuse the poetics with a positive vibe; too many dark dystopian responses leave us in a negative place. I did not see that image in the selection; it is a whole different dominion with two figures.

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    1. Hi Glenn,

      Well, you know I tend to be a bit of a romantic so I guess that is where my mind wandered.

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  5. Don't save on floppy disks! No computer reads those now.

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    1. haha - that is so true a flash drive would be the way.

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  6. cool. we do try to capture those moments...though we have to be careful not to be so busy capturing them, that we do not live them...i like the intimacy you got out of the techno jargon in that first bit...

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    1. Hi Brian, that is true we need to remember to live our lives not just capture the moments. Living, breathing and feeling alive is a good thing.

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  7. Yes, you definitely are a romantic. So am I, believe it or not! Cackle.......

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    1. Thanks for stopping over..always nice to see you here.

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  8. You make tech human


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    <3

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    1. I think I would much rather have a human touch..see a smile, hear a voice all the things we humans do well.

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  9. freeing space in our heart...i think that is the core here for me... not just capturing the moments but free to embrace them

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    1. That is very true sometimes we need that human touch.

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  10. precious memories saved forever...that's the best part of "interfacing".

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  11. love is our virtual reality... nice

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    1. But, can love be uploaded into the universe?

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  12. Love How you found that unique picture of togetherness - Evenås Cypern has its romance.

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    1. I guess one never knows where romance can be found.

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  13. lovely capture... Those memories are little films... smiles... inserted into our brains, like a floppy disc in a computer tower.

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    1. Hi Anthony - I wonder how many of those disc are taking up space out there. Our brains really are mini computers in many ways.

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  14. Moments we capture and hold onto, reloading at will or sometimes they reload without us even thinking, out of the blue. Not sure floppy disks can hold much though haha

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    1. That is true reloading sometimes when we least expect and it makes us pause to reflect.

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  15. Very clever, and positive, take on the prompt. I like the link with movies and the idea that good moments can be reloaded.

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    1. Hey, our lives are the greatest movie and we are the stars.

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  16. I like the idea of precious memories being saved forever.. nice! Rather than becoming obsolete, they are useful. Very cool poem.

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    1. I guess we need to decide what memories to store and which ones to delete.

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  17. Floppy disks, almost ancient relics now. I still have a few stories written on some of them. :)

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    1. I am sure you do have a story or two and I can't wait to read your book "Woven" when it is released I am sure it will be amazing.

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  18. Nice view of technology. I like how you infused a romantic aspect to it. Very creative.

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  19. I remember hearing our words are never lost - they bounce around the universe. Maybe memories do, too. The happy ones, I hope.

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    1. Hmm that could be true words and memories bouncing all over the universe.

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  20. These captured arms and hearts when free space was still available....ah, your poem really touching deeply, true...

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    1. Thank you Humbird..I think we all need to free some space here and there.

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  21. Truly there was a time when my electronic equipment seemed alive.. and then I went out to really dance and then i too.. became a life!..;)

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    1. I like that, so glad you went out to really dance..

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  22. That's the beauty of it. Things can now be saved unlike before. One's efforts are recorded in memory! Wonderful write Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks Hank, saved for generations to come.

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  23. A sweet interpretation! :)

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  24. reminds of the the Pensieve in Harry Potter, where they could extract and store memories from a tear... ~

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    1. I had forgotten that cool image..thanks..

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