Monday, August 10, 2015

Beyond the Vapor




love is blind
naked & vulnerable
you think I cannot see you
but, I see beyond the vapor
filled room, your scent lingers
I feel you, even though
I cannot touch you...
swirls of smoke surround
us....taking deep breaths
our spirits become one
inhale...exhale..
where there is smoke
there is a fire
 where there is an ember
there is a spark
I see it in your
eyes
together we ignite

written for Magpie Tales 282
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30 comments:

  1. Pat HattAugust 10, 2015

    Hmm there could be smoke where there was fire, fire could have been put out lol had to. A great spark that hits the mark.

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    1. Pat HattAugust 10, 2015

      #1 what fun

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    2. TruedessaAugust 10, 2015

      That could be, but the embers always burn...then the spark ignites and the fire once again burns...

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughAugust 10, 2015

    I can feel the intensity...

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  3. GailAugust 10, 2015

    Thanks for visiting. I always enjoy your writes.

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    1. TruedessaAugust 10, 2015

      Hi Gail, always nice to have a friend visit..Hope you are well..

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  4. UnknownAugust 10, 2015

    Sexy. :-) Nice write. The picture this week has turned everyone towards these sensual thoughts. Fun. :-)

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    1. TruedessaAugust 10, 2015

      Hi,

      I am just getting around to reading some of the poems and we certainly have some interesting writes. I think summer has put some poets in a sultry mood.

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  5. Vandana SharmaAugust 10, 2015

    it has a story of passionate love

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    1. TruedessaAugust 10, 2015

      I think it does...but is love blind?

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 10, 2015

    "where there is an ember there is a spark"...........wonderful!

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    1. TruedessaAugust 10, 2015

      Hi Sherry,

      I guess where this a spark there is fire..thanks for visiting my friend.

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  7. Kathe W.August 10, 2015

    sparks do ignite!

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  8. XAugust 11, 2015

    Whew. LIght up the night with that kinda intense love. This builds nicely. Love is what it is - and will find a way, if it is.

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    1. TruedessaAugust 16, 2015

      I often wonder what exactly is "love"

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  9. brudbergAugust 11, 2015

    There is never fire without smoke.. if there's ember there is hope.

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    1. TruedessaAugust 16, 2015

      That is very true Bjorn...hope is a good thing..right?

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  10. BerowneAugust 11, 2015

    I see it in your eyes, an amber ember...

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  11. DEZMONDAugust 12, 2015

    I wonder of they got married in the end :)))

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    1. Blue GrumpsterAugust 16, 2015

      Marriage... is overrated. Or so they say. (Who? They.)

      Hi True.

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    2. TruedessaAugust 16, 2015

      Hi Blue

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  12. Glenn ButtkusAugust 12, 2015

    Your last line is killer, & the sizzle of your sensuality certainly reveals another side to the gal who goes on adventures with Captain Patt. Thanks for stopping by my place even without participating in dVerse this time; I always dig it.

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    1. TruedessaAugust 16, 2015

      smiling - You know I always find your writing intriguing...thanks for the visit here as well...always nice to see a friend.

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  13. DeepaAugust 17, 2015

    Lovely take on the prompt

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  14. Dr. Vandana SharmaAugust 18, 2015

    filled with passion as love rises in the smoke

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    1. TruedessaAugust 18, 2015

      interesting prompt that started a spark..I guess...thanks for commenting.

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