In quiet moments
I turn the pages
of my heart
reading from
a book filled
with love
with love
one beat
one heart
one song
your words
meshed with mine
lost in another time
a poetess
a lyricist
in harmony
falling
deeper
into
a sea
of
desire
in tune
we sang
of hopes
and dreams
writing letters
bringing forth
words
bringing forth
words
one beat
one heart
one song
on wide wings
over a sparkling vista
we soared new
heights
seeking the deeper
meaning of life
following dreams
we met on a star
burning bright
here our tale
really began, seeking
the greatest story
we ventured onward
vibrating with energy
a new world in the
seventh heaven star
aligning our gift
of knowing
through Orion's Belt
we slipped into a hole
of wonder...
one beat
one heart
one heart
one song
sharing with Poets United
What a song of love rising and falling with the rhythm of the words and the 'heart of wonder'....really loved this beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you Donna..smiling..
DeleteHow ideal it would be to experience the feeling of one beat, one heart, one song.....in one's hopes and dreams. It would be enough to make one's heart overflow with happiness.
ReplyDeleteI think we all yearn for that sort of understanding in the journey.
DeleteI think if we can reach such harmony the boundaries would melt and whatever tethers us will break... wonderful when you have it...
ReplyDeleteI like the thought of tethers being broken..free to soar..
Deleteone beat
ReplyDeleteone heart
one song
The repetitive lines seem to add even more beauty and warmth to the poem :) Beautifully done.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
thank you Sanna
DeleteWhat an incredibly beautiful journey that must have been, my friend........soaring, creating new music, one heart.....one song. Sigh. It was a beautiful journey just reading this poem.
ReplyDeleteHi My Friend,
DeleteThanks for visiting as always! Will check in on you soon!
How very beautiful .. agree with all that you caught the feeling with the lovely repetition
ReplyDeletethanks that works for me..
DeleteSuch a way of life would sure be grand, beating as one across the land
ReplyDeleteIt sure would be grand one beat, one heart, one song
DeleteI wonder what two souls are entwined in one beat? Beautifully done, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex!
DeleteBeautifully crafted. So romantic. A lovely, evocative refrain.
ReplyDeleteHi Wendy,
Deletethanks, I loved the poem you posted.
Like the repetition!
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteWonderfully worded and full of whimsy (and I'm full of Ws today apparently). Also, I learned a new word today - poetess. I like that.
ReplyDeleteI like that word whimsy..it is fun to say..and look you learned a new word. smiling...
DeleteThis had such a cosmic feel to it. Loved it.
ReplyDeletethanks Suzy and welcome back
DeleteHi Trudessa - lovely words and to be able to 'sink' into these words and imagine a new life and world mixed with the universe - especially at this time. Cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHi Hilary,
DeleteI agree we need a bit of magic in changing times.
Cheers
love that refrain...love is truly that..beautiful....
ReplyDeleteIt can be that...
DeleteYes, that is wonder-ful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary for the wonder-ful comment..smiling..
DeleteI love the flow of this piece - it sings of harmony...created perhaps rather than won...
ReplyDeleteHi Jae Rose, harmony is part of the music..
DeleteA lovely testament, so softly rendered and understated. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteSteve K.
Sometimes - understated is enough..thanks for visiting.
Deletewe met on a star
ReplyDeleteburning bright
And maintained the brightness for a long long time. Fine poem!
thanks Susan...we are all stars ..
DeleteThis is beautiful. How wonderful to experience love like this.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Myrna
Deleteseeking the deeper
ReplyDeletemeaning of life
I like that. But has it ever crossed your mind that seeking meaning may be a human flaw? No?
Oh okay :)
hmm..Do I think it is a human flaw? My answer would be no as we must always dig deeper as life is about living and learning. When you stop seeking you stop growing as a person. Will we ever find that deeper meaning? It depends on what you are seeking? Some things will never be discovered no matter how hard we search.
DeleteOkay :)
What I mean is... maybe seeking meaning is a human thing, the tunnel through which we see the world. No?
DeleteHi Truedessa,
ReplyDeleteEnticingly thoughtful words, my kind friend. And the pages of your heart reveals the next page, the next chapter in the adventure, the hope that is the cosmos beyond in love's allure.
Okay, I haven't got a clue what I'm talking about :)
Gary
haha - I kind of like it when you don't know what you are talking about. Thanks for visiting my kind friend.
DeleteI know, I shall blame my bordering on incoherent ramblings, on being awake at two thirty in the morning! Yes, time zones! Arggghhhh!!!!!
Deletehaha - How are you my friend? You should be sleeping and entering the dreamscape.
DeleteI'm typing this while asleep. I'm a bit better, thank you. I hope you are okay and have managed to get some relaxing moments. Now then, time for some total REM and nothing to do with the band or shiny, happy people...:)
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