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In the absence of light
there is only darkness
In the absence of rain
there is only drought
In the absence of peace
there is only war
In the absence of love
there is only hate
In the absence of friendship
there is only loneliness
In the absence of vision
there is only blindness
In the absence of sound
there is only silence
In the absence of a mountain
there is only a plateau
In the absence of dreams
there is only reality
In the absence of you
there is only emptiness
In the absence of death
will there be ever-lasting life...
posted for Poets United
writing about absence
A very good question. By the laws of opposites, it seems so.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely breathtaking!!
ReplyDeleteLove the way you ended it!
ReplyDeleteluv where this is going, but surely you had to come to a stop
ReplyDeleteNice one
much love...
Of that I am not sure - but i truly hope the absences in our life aren't carried over into the next - in some circumstances once is definitely enough - i think you have written a stellar poem full of doubts and truths we all must touch upon in some way throughout the course of a day
ReplyDeletein the absence of living a truth
ReplyDeleteone is living a lie
Always a yin and yang to each. Nice ending too as ever lasting life comes due.
ReplyDeletelove the progression of the poem and the final question is a stunner...
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem to ponder the dichotomies of life!
ReplyDeleteI love how thought provoking this is, especially that last line. It's still too early for me to be pondering such things, but as soon as I get some coffee in me I'll get the ol' rusty brain to think it over.
ReplyDeleteWow – a wonderful progressing, leading to that now very logical question.
ReplyDeleteYou have managed to express truths in a very creative way! Clever & original poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done, my friend....I ponder on how large a presence absence can sometimes be. I love your poem.
ReplyDeleteIn the absence of you
ReplyDeletethere is only emptiness
Yearnings for a loved one has no finality. There is always a place in her heart for him! Very much so True!
Hank
cool and philosophical - nice work on this piece
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful poem! So many things we would be missing!
ReplyDeleteSuch contradictions....and the end is so thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteHi Truedessa - how very true ... in the absence of death we continue, life continues, our world continues ...
ReplyDeleteTake care - Hilary