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| artist unknown |
Autumn
vibrant colors
tumbling leaves swirl around
balancing life on fragile limbs
changing
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season
fall equinox
progressive rhythm of life
harvesting summer memories
drifting
sharing with Poets United
writing about the Fall Equinox
love this beautiful sketch of vibrant autumn, with its swirling, progressive rhythm of life...
ReplyDeleteI love the harvesting of summer memories......
ReplyDeleteAboreal fireworks at their most beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLet's hope those summer memories keep you warm in winter.
ReplyDeleteHi Truedessa - Harvest time is definitely with us ... it's a lovely season. Balancing life on fragile limbs ... lovely poem and words ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteAnd that captures the gentle changes well!
ReplyDeleteI love this poem backwards aND FORWARDS!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy the idea of harvesting summer memories! Nothing better to harvest this time of year.
ReplyDeleteA change of view well captured by you as a changing comes due
ReplyDeleteI love the way this poem flows... Like the seasons... moving through the land... leaving kisses of its comings and goings.
ReplyDeleteOh you really can read it fowards and backwards Changing views is an apt title. Well done !
ReplyDeleteReally do get a great sense of movement from this, like the drifting leaves. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteMovement is what makes a view special - perhaps it proves it and we are alive
ReplyDeleteAwakening our dreams? Magical write
ReplyDeleteAh, a double cinquain! A very effective way to create this vivid description / reflection.
ReplyDeleteOoh such a wonderfully crafted cinquain 💖 and that too a double!
ReplyDeleteThis is a joy to read. A wonderful little piece. "harvesting summer memories" - Wowzers! Love it!
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