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From heaven a star child once fell
within her heart a dream did dwell
lyrical songs , a magical spell
bumpy ride she could not foretell
poetic words spilled from her soul
penning verses on ancient scrolls
on secreted roads, she did stroll
seeking pieces to make her whole
weary from travel, on knees she fell
clinging to words, parchment scrolls
in mystic dew, a dragon on a stroll
new vision fortune she could foretell
awakening dreams, within her soul
opening space, for love to dwell
sleeping under a wondrous spell
healing torn wings, feeling whole
with clarity she can now foretell
embracing love's magical spell
forever the melody will dwell
from heaven a star child once fell
sharing with Poets United
form Martin Verse
authors's note: Martin created his own form
and invited readers to try it and so I did.
authors's note: Martin created his own form
and invited readers to try it and so I did.
Thanks Martin for the inspiration!
It is definitely fun to try a new form sometime....and you really created a stellar poem with it. What a lovely theme as well!
ReplyDeleteFrom down to up, life sure can go many away as love comes to play. Fun form indeed.
ReplyDeleteI LIKE this new form! And the poem is beautiful....I especially like the star child falling from heaven........and healing her torn wings.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of martin verse.
ReplyDeleteAnd the star child may have fallen - but her words rise. And soar.
Like new forms and thanks for the introduction. You did it well,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Cool form, and a great story too.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting form - and what an enchanting tale. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteIt will always be in her heart.
ReplyDeleteInteresting form..very lyrical.
ReplyDeleteYou Did It!!!
ReplyDeleteand exceptionally!
Thank you so much.
I think your title is very descriptive of the form--the poem reads like a bumpy circle... much like life.
ReplyDeletethis is a beautiful poem & you've used this form so effortlessly...a fantastic read...
ReplyDeleteLove the story and rhyme. well penned too.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteAn enchanting little story.
ReplyDeleteMagical story for a magical time...bkm
ReplyDeleteLove the tale, love the form... :-)
ReplyDeleteinteresting form, and the poem is a real joy to read.
ReplyDeletei like the image of "from heaven a star child once fell". there are many possibilities of looking at it. :)
Kudos, True. This would make a wonderful, illustrated fairy tale.
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