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Autumn swans swimming
sunlight now dimming
love rises in depths of night
finding grace in dreams
under soft moonbeams
together we can take flight
floating feather light
sweet songs of delight
entwined in a cosmic glow
darkness drifts away
in the warmth of day
before the winter snow blows
posted for dVerse
writing an Aloutte
Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAs is the feathered enchantment you chose to illustrate your words.
Nice autumn love song and it looks like love will survive the coming winter.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Frank - what a lovely autumn love song.
ReplyDeletethe rhythm is too as soft as a feather, lovely.
ReplyDeleteI can hear a lute playing under the willow with lovers together.
ReplyDeleteTogether they can bring light even in the darkest night
ReplyDeleteThe magic of love!
ReplyDeleteSwans are symbolic of love.
DeleteLove your 'autumn swans swimming'....very appropriate right now as we all begin our hibernation till spring.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful to read. An uplifting poem in a dark week.
ReplyDeleteSomehow this form has lent itself to some very beautiful poetry and yours is no exception. It sounds so light, gentle and free!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely dreamy. You know I love your rhyme style
ReplyDeletefinding grace in dreams
ReplyDeleteunder soft moonbeams
together we can take flight
How nice to 'take flight' to dream together with a loved one
Hank
Love the words and the image
ReplyDeleteSwans are so romantic... though they are a bit clumsy taking flight in reality.. some of their grace is lost there.
ReplyDeleteperhaps, it is not so much about the flight as it is the journey, to finding a deeper intuitive love.
DeleteLove the metaphor of love through the seasons Truedessa ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace, I hope you are well?
DeleteLet's take flight.
ReplyDeleteOk,spreading my wings
DeleteWhat a lovely rhythm and flow...so soft and gentle to the ear.
ReplyDeletethank Mish
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