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just riffing thinking out loud
i am just drifting in a cloud
passing through heavenly portals
as if, I were more than mortal
beyond dark skies flying high
where the magpie passes by(e)
devouring yellow moon cakes
creating angels out of snowflakes
into a realm of wonder I am drawn
lucid dreaming before new dawn
poetry scattered in morning frost
internal/external rhymes are lost
mourning crows cover frozen trees
teardrops fall in winter's freeze
snowy owl swoops across the land
shifting views, hard to understand
Such gorgeous imagery. I especially love the owl swooping across the land..........a wise being, she must be confused at what the humans are up to these days.
ReplyDeleteContains both a magical and tragic feel - well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat rhyme flow indeed. Oh what a frosty land can do, need a heater at ones zoo lol
ReplyDeletePlaying with our imaginations. Quite an enjoyable adventure.
ReplyDeleteHi Truedessa - loved the thoughts here ... and
ReplyDelete"mourning crows cover frozen trees
teardrops fall in winter's freeze"
reminds me of carrion and deathly hoods ... fairly depressing ... but I love how you've expressed it here -
Cheers Hilary
You may be "just riffing," but the images you evoke are compelling, Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteWow, the images you have brought forth are breath taking! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteHey True!
ReplyDeleteHaunting, dare I say, chilling words that invoke a sense of melancholy intertwined with tear-dropped trees.
Peace and hope, peace and hope, my lovely friend.
Gary
Superb, it bounced through my mind, such rhythm
ReplyDelete"Lucid dreaming before new dawn..." I don't have to remind you how jealous that makes your blue friend.
ReplyDeleteEven if it's just a riff, it's a whimsical one with such vivid imagery. I love the picture you painted here.
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