Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Water the Elixir of Life



Standing Rock Photo

  in a whiskey colored sky
my thoughts are stirred
standing on the rocks
in solidarity
wild buffalo hammered
on sacred ground for justice
 round radiant moon
offered light,  proof
of strong united spirits

written for dVerse
hosted by De
  

20 comments:

  1. Love this use of "proof" especially. And of course, that whiskey colored sky. :)

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  2. I like the phrase: "wild buffalo hammered
    sacred ground"

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  3. Whiskey colored sky - now that is a really cool and unique description.

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  4. I like this reference to Standing Rock ;)

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  5. They have a right to their survival instincts but still light is provided to make it easier!

    Hank

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  6. Such a sky lightens the way as they survive away

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  7. That must have been a powerful moment, well-captured by your poem.

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  8. Such beautiful phrases ...

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  9. This is beautiful, and so clever, and also I'm thirsty. Is this what alcoholism feels like?

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  10. Nice work, True--captured profound imagery in those slim 33 parameters; best spots already mentioned--but loved the piece.

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  11. Ahhhhh.......I LOVE that "whiskey colored sky"!!!! Love the wild buffalo standing on sacred ground for justice.

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  12. Beautiful sentiment...as things are going the water carers are going to need every prayer we can offer...and some.

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  13. Love the closing.. and the whiskey colored sky... we need the buffalo and those who love them

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  14. oh, this is such a beautiful and uplifting write!

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  15. Can't help but feel there is more to this under whiskey colored sky. You caught my imagination.

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  16. Love this write - and yes, we do need that proof of spirit :)

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  17. Sigh..❤️ you had me at the opening lines... beautiful!!❤️

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  18. "United Spirits"!! Beautiful! Great words!

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  19. Well done and well said with hopes that the Buffalo get their demand.

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