Thursday, July 19, 2018

Stepping in Time

Credit - Truedessa





































will you follow me through the door
unravel secrets from another time
hidden passageways for us to explore
staircase to the universe, steps to climb
seven stars in the night, offer a sign
will you listen to the ancestor's songs
dawn sings of a place for us to belong

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18 comments:

  1. Frank HubenyJuly 19, 2018

    Nice sound and thought of going through the door to explore the universe's secrets. I like that last line about having a place to belong.

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    1. TruedessaJuly 20, 2018

      Thanks Frank for your comment and hosting.

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  2. MELODY JACOBJuly 20, 2018

    you write really nice dear
    MAKE SURE YOU Have a beautiful weekend
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  3. Pat HattJuly 20, 2018

    That door sure holds a lot. Have to take it step by step.

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    1. TruedessaJuly 20, 2018

      Step by step keeps one moving in some sort of direction.

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  4. Alex J. CavanaughJuly 20, 2018

    Off on a magical adventure...

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    1. TruedessaJuly 20, 2018

      Off on an adventure, who knows when I will return.

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  5. Anmol (HA)July 20, 2018

    Ah, that journey seems to inspire a kind of wisdom of life itself. It would be remarkable to explore those secrets. The seven stars reminded me of our local myths about the Big Dipper. :-)
    -HA

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    1. TruedessaJuly 20, 2018

      I’d love it if you shared your myth. I often seek the Big and Little Dipper on a starry night.

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  6. Glenn ButtkusJuly 20, 2018

    There you go again, off on yet another magical adventure--though this poem is more spiritual and less whimsical than some of your other adventures. For me, the door is a portal.

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    1. TruedessaJuly 20, 2018

      Hi Glenn for me doors are always portals and I am always eager to enter and see what takes flight.

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  7. The Silver FoxJuly 20, 2018

    You've been writing some really intriguing stuff lately! Love this!

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  8. GraceJuly 20, 2018

    Yes I would, specially to see those 7 stars in 1 night ~ Magical journey for sure ~

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  9. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 21, 2018

    This is so beautiful....the doorway into the unknown......the seven stars. A wonderful invitation.

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  10. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comJuly 22, 2018

    I feel a mystery here....it's almost a mythological invitation!

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  11. Jaya Prakash AJuly 22, 2018

    staircase to the universe, dawn sings of a place for us to belong
    - Wonderful lines, depicts a beautiful image.

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