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by the river of dreams you will find me
singing a melody meant just for you
untold treasures, I offer you the key
by the river of dreams you will find me
riding currents of pleasure to the sea
on a mossy bed, let our hearts beat true
by the river of dreams you will find me
singing a melody meant just for you
sharing with Poets United
Thank you for sharing part
of your day with me!
A melody for only two, the dream of many to come due.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, may your dreams come true...
Deletewell shared :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae!
DeleteIt is beautiful by the river of dreams!
ReplyDeleteI believe it is beautiful in so many ways. Thanks Sherry!
DeleteSo earthy AND romantic.
ReplyDeleteThank you colleen...
DeleteOh I so love the repeated lines... beautiful and rhythmic.
ReplyDeleteBjorn, you know this form works well when one has a message.
DeleteAnd what a beautiful melody it is!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex, may it play on and on...
DeleteHi Leslie - lovely to read ... the river of dreams - don't we all have them ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteYou may have me mistaken with someone else!, but thanks for reading..
DeleteSigh... this is beautiful to read and envision.. 💜💜
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanaa - much appreciated
DeleteI'm always jealous by what you can do with rhyme and rhythm, with poetry that reads like song, with imagery that touches the heart... and says, "Dance with me."
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful.
Thank Magaly - No need to be jealous you have a very beautiful pen and I admire your writing...
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thanks Anna
DeleteA very romantic invitation. The repeated phrases works well. Adds a musical flow to your mystical river
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my Sunday Standard today Trudessa
Much💞love
Thank you Gillena and you are most welcome. I enjoy your blog.
DeleteWhat a gentle and romantic invitation this is. Lucky the person who receives it. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary!
DeleteLovely words set to a wonderful mesmeric cadence. The piece channels a beautiful dreamlike quality that invites a restful linger.
ReplyDeleteThank you Wendy. Channeling dreams it what I do..smiles..
DeleteA lovely love song.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Thanks ZQ!
Deletebeautiful poem and placed perfectly against that image :)
ReplyDeleteThanks you, I wrote the poem first then found that amazing image. It was meant to be I think.
DeleteThat image works so well with that song!
ReplyDeleteThank you, the image is stunning
DeleteMagical and inspiring! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Audrey - it's nice to see you again..
Deletelet our hearts beat true
ReplyDeleteby the river of dreams you will find me
singing a melody meant just for you
How nice to be wanted, True!
Hank
Thank you Hank! See you in the place to be...
DeleteBeautiful! but now I long to hear that melody.
ReplyDeleteSmiling - thank you...
Deleteso lovely & sweet.
ReplyDeletelove the repetitions, like currents flowing. :)
thank you
DeleteNothing beats a song meant for and dedicated to one person. I've written a few of those, myself.
ReplyDeleteMaybe, you can post one Silver :)
DeleteActually, I did, recently, on May 26 and June 2.
DeleteThat you did, I saw your lyrical ‘pomes’
DeleteHmm, ok now I am going to write a new song :)
So beautiful! You have such a gift Truedessa! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteThank you Stacy. Hugs back
DeleteLovely. And that picture certainly echoes your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra, I hope you have a Happy 4th !
DeleteA beautiful love poem. What a nice way to end my day.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Glad it brought a happy ending to your day!
DeleteBeautiful. I think flowing water always makes for epic imagery and a wonderful metaphor.
ReplyDeleteI agree Crystal...thanks for visiting...
DeleteWhat do dreams look like, True?
ReplyDeleteAll I need is a glimpse.
One will do.
Hi Blue,
DeleteI could give you a glimpse of a dream
dreams are the language of the soul
sequences of life and more it seems
filled with imagery thoughts on a roll
Look into your heart and you will find a dream...
If only I could remember my dreams. It's probably for the best that I don't. Hi True. How are you?
DeleteHi Blue!
DeleteHello True.
DeleteHow are you?
Wrote a prequel today
At my bay
You said you wanted me to create
Early or late...
Yes, you did Blue
Deleteit made me smile too
Good to know
DeleteAt your show!
Oh, so sweetly romantic!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary
DeleteSing long and prosper -
ReplyDeleteDream always and prosper ~
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