Tuesday, February 5, 2019

Visible, Invisible, Inexplicable


I dreamt of meeting you
eye to eye, heart to heart
soul to soul...

but, you chose to be invisible
hiding behind a  cloak of
mystery

our words, poems and songs
were the visible evidence
of our spiritual connection...

what is invisible to the eye
is not invisible to the heart
love is inexplicable

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18 comments:

  1. KBFebruary 05, 2019

    I've been there in a relationship

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  2. GinaFebruary 06, 2019

    oh such a tender poem about wanting to know the heart of the one she loves.

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  3. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 06, 2019

    Sometimes that's how a relationship goes...

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  4. GraceFebruary 06, 2019

    And so it is. As long as the deep connection is there, it may be all that matters in the end.

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 06, 2019

    Beautiful.....the pain of connection when one person holds back. Every relationship of mine was with someone emotionally elusive. Except for a big black wolf. Which is why he meant so much.

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  6. The Silver FoxFebruary 06, 2019

    Sometimes -- hell, usually -- one person in a relationship gives more than the other. (More what can vary.) I once described a friend's relationship with a woman by saying "For every 60% he gives, she gives 30%. And he wonders why he never comes up with 100." Oh, well, it seemed pretty profound when I first said it one drunken evening.

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  7. Pat HattFebruary 06, 2019

    Sure how many a way goes when love flows.

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  8. Jade LiFebruary 06, 2019

    It's sad to see dreams fall away when it seems so right....

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  9. robtkistnerFebruary 07, 2019

    Yes Truedessa, the heart cann see what the voice may not. Wonderful write.

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  10. Sanaa RizviFebruary 07, 2019

    This is so beautifully eloquent! Sometimes we come across people who only bring half of themselves to the table. We deserve better!!❤️

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  11. lynn__February 07, 2019

    I really like the final stanza...so true!

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  12. Merril D. SmithFebruary 07, 2019

    You sum it up well with "Love is inexplicable." A lovely poem.

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  13. brudbergFebruary 07, 2019

    Love such a connection beyond the visible... inexplicable is the truth

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  14. Gina GaoFebruary 07, 2019

    This is so true!

    www.ficklemillennial.blogspot.com

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  15. klahanieFebruary 08, 2019

    Hey True,

    One-way love and the heart aches that it wasn't so.

    Wishing you a peaceful weekend, my thoughtful friend.

    Gary

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  16. Magic Love CrowFebruary 12, 2019

    Very true!

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  17. Fundy BlueFebruary 18, 2019

    I've definitely been there, and the beauty of your words brings back poignant memories.

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  18. Blue GrumpsterFebruary 20, 2019

    This one strikes a chord with me.

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