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Photography by Oladios
"I can't see the end of me."
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There's a place in me
that you cannot see
I guard it protectively
would you view it objectively
heart shaped it holds all that I feel
sometimes it's hard to conceal
eyes are the portals to the soul
lost are pieces that make me whole
ancient proverb claims a cat has nine lives
I struggle with one trying to survive
all life has a beginning, middle and end
lost are the riddles, too deep to comprehend
will you remember the love I penned
will you remember the love I penned
will you remember the love I penned
will you remember the love I penned
written for The Sunday Muse
Nirvana - Oh, Me
This is wonderful, a fairy tale riddle wrapped in a poem! This makes me both wistful and happy.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this! The unseen heart- a precious thing-worthy of protection.
ReplyDeleteYes the heart is so vital but a mystery unseen. This is an amazing poem Truedessa! Beautifully written...I love every line!
ReplyDeleteYES! I will. I LOVE this poem!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like the rhymes in this poem. It all builds up to the thrice asked question at the end.
ReplyDeleteThat special spark within us - very nice!
ReplyDeleteI am certain you WILL be remembered for the love you pen. And for your kindness and generosity.
ReplyDeleteOh, you are leaving a legacy of poetry...You will be remembered. Loved the writing approach...nice work!
ReplyDeleteA spark to remember indeed even if some remains to one's self.
ReplyDeleteThis has a sad undertone, but a true soul is never forgotten.
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