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Beyond the deep violet veil of night
standing before an ancient gate-keeper
within me a flame begins to ignite
guide me to the sacred fire-keeper
overhead a bald eagle takes flight
between the worlds moves a dream-keeper
drinking from the mystical river of life
written for dVerse Quadrille 91 - Keep
hosted by Kim - writing a quadrille
of 44 words incorporating "Keep"
author's note: This is a tidbit from a dream
May all of your dreams be good ones
author's note: This is a tidbit from a dream
May all of your dreams be good ones
A dream to drink from that mystical river of life. I specially love this part:
ReplyDeletewithin me a flame begins to ignite
guide me to the sacred fire-keeper
Thank you Grace so nice to see you visit!
DeleteAnd it fits the image so well! Keep following those dreams.
ReplyDeleteDream on ,Dream on, dream on
DeleteDream until your dreams come true...
Very nicely done! I love the mystical feel of your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dwight, it all started with a dream..
DeleteDelightful fantasy
ReplyDeleteThank you Bev I consider myself a keeper of dreams
Deletethis poem is a cupful from that river
ReplyDeleteThank you so much let us sip from that cup.
DeleteLove the myth, mystery, and magic of this True — excellent write! :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Rob, an excellent write I am humbled coming from someone who writes beautiful poetry.
DeleteAn intriguing violet-vivid dream! I’d like to know more about the three keepers, especially the dream-keeper drinking from the mystical river of life. I agree with Eric about your poem being a cupful from that river.
ReplyDeletePerhaps, I will expand on it one day, thank you for visiting and commenting.
DeleteFollow the dream and see what occurs indeed.
ReplyDeleteI keep following knowing not where the journey leads.
DeleteI like the dream-keeper going between worlds.
ReplyDeleteThanks Frank, the keeper is mysterious.
DeleteVery vivid imagery. I like it.
ReplyDeleteWell Hello, So glad to see you here. I hope that means you are writing.
DeleteThis is wonderfully vivid and enchanting!! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanaa, so nice of you to visit :)
DeleteThis sounds like a magic life... some dreams I would love to keep... others I would love to forget.
ReplyDeleteHi Bjorn, I think we all have some we would like to forget. Especially broken dreams (sigh)
DeleteThat movement between worlds is ethereal. Love this line : drinking from the mystical river of life
ReplyDeleteThank Vivian, may we all find that river one day!
DeleteI usually dream weird stuff!
ReplyDeleteI do too sometimes Dez.
DeleteThis put my mind at ease as I read, as a dream-catcher would. :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad you found a sense of calmness. Nice to see you David!
DeleteTrue Ma'am
ReplyDeleteHank is around. Thanks for your concern. Hank has a project at hand. Hank's time is taken by it.Hank will make up for it. Cheers!
Hank
Very beautiful. It draws me into the night.
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