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This song of spring begins to grow
tree limbs budding with renewal
rising with the morning sun glow
seasonal changes are crucial
tree limbs budding with renewal
the crocus breaking the darkness
rain glistens like a precious jewel
contemplating heavens vastness
the crocus breaking the darkness
choir of robins sing in harmony
contemplating heavens vastness
practicing the art of psalmody
choir of robins sing in harmony
rising with the morning sun glow
practicing the art of psalmody
this song of spring begins to grow
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Lovely seasonal imagery here; a fine pantoum to welcome spring - that most optimistic of seasons.
ReplyDeleteThank you Peter, I enjoyed the prompt.
DeleteGreat pantoum, True! Perfect repetitions make it lovely to read. Hank is ok Ma'am, participating whenever possible!
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Hi Hank, so glad you came to visit. Stay safe...
DeleteI like the way the next line repeats, carrying the story forward.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex, there is always a story waiting to be told and sometimes it circles back around. Looking forward to your new book release.
DeleteAn exquisite pantoum ....
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen. I do enjoy writing to this form.
DeleteThis is such a breathtaking Pantoum!💝💝
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanaa, appreciate the visit.
DeleteVery nicely done! I am so glad to see spring and put this winter of our discontent to rest!!
ReplyDeleteSpring brings hope and new life into the landscape of our world. We are always moving forward with the seasons.
DeleteI love this spring pantoum....beautiful! The other day I caught that first whiff of earth stirring, always so exciting in spring.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry, spring is slowly blooming.
DeleteTruedessa, you are so right, the sounds of spring do grow! I like how the crocus breaks the darkness. The spring peepers were out en force a few days ago but it's cooled off and now they are quiet again.
ReplyDeleteToday, it is raining and all I hear is the rain which is needed to help break the darkness.
DeleteSpring is so wonderful... and it is coming every more each day.
ReplyDeleteThat it is Bjorn, spring a time of rejoicing for the miracles of life.
DeletePerfect pantoum! I like the fact that you started and ended with Spring.
ReplyDeleteThank you circling back around to spring and rebirth.
DeleteI love these signs of spring that begin to appear. Today I smelled magnolia blossoms...so fragrant.
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