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Waltz me where dreams are bold
waltz me where stars are gold
waltz me where love unfolds
waltz me a flower moon
waltz me a joyful tune
waltz me a lover swoon
waltz me to morning dew
waltz me to roads to you
waltz me to sky of blue
Linking with dVerse
writing poetry that waltzes
hosted by Bjorn
I took creative liberty and made
each line 6 syllables with 3 verses
each with 3 lines.
My wandering mind waltzed in circles...
I love this ... Leonard Cohen had a 'waltz song' I loved ~~ your poem reminds me of it .... Cheers!!!
ReplyDelete"Dance Me To The End Of Love' - My favorite Cohen song.
DeleteLovely rhymes and imagery here: a dance unfolding in words!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Let the dance commence...
DeleteI liked the words of your blog, hope we follow each other
ReplyDeleteHi, thank you I am not sure I can follow unknown but, I do appreciate your comment.
DeleteWell done! all the rhymes, and the repeating downbeat of Waltz is dizzying!
ReplyDeleteRon haha I actually waltzed around with my imaginary partner, as I read the words 1 2 3, 1, 2,3 to the beat...
DeleteWonderful rhythm to it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex! Hope you have a wonderful weekend.
DeleteThis is so lovely. I especially love the title.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I will be waltzing to my drum under the flower moon, maybe more of a sashay haha romancing the moon.
DeleteI can see you waltzing in your garden. Love the waltz me repetition.
ReplyDeleteThere's something soothing about waltz rhythm. I do believe one can be waltzed to the moon and back!
ReplyDeleteI can see and feel this all! Thank you for the beautiful words! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful poem, and when you find the right one you'll swirl to the moon and back
ReplyDeleteLove the title, and the wonderful magic of the poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful waltz dance. Just in time for the flower moon!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful blog
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