Tuesday, September 13, 2022

The Dovecote

Dovecote by Lee Madgwick

 Darkness crept into the house of dreams
longing for adventure and true love
past the meadow, whispered the stream
following the moon-glow from above

longing for adventure and true love
she left the comfort of the dovecote
following the moon-glow from above
a coo not-yet sung, stuck in her throat

she left the comfort of the dovecote
searching for a place where love breeds
a coo not-yet sung, stuck in her throat
be careful of midnight wishes you seed

searching for a place where love breeds
past the meadow, whispered the stream
be careful of midnight wishes you seed
darkness crept  into the house of dreams

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39 comments:

  1. OMG such an enchanting poem. Luv the rhthym of this one.
    Much💛love

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  2. Very well written, Trudessa! Nice work.

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    1. Dwight, thank you for reading and the comment.

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  3. Love the repeated lines of the poetry form. That last stanza sums the dovecote wistful journey with:
    be careful of midnight wishes you seed
    darkness crept in the house of dreams

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    1. Hi Grace, i was feeling the form and this poem just fell into place. Thank you for visiting.

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  4. Beautiful piece True, captivating essence. Well written my friend. 🙂✌🏼❤️

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    1. Thank you Rob, i think we were on the same wavelength with our choice of artwork.

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  5. haunting and searching... I loved it. Well done with the form!

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    1. Thank you, I felt there was something more in the artwork. A soul search, perhaps.

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  6. Excellent pantouming - and I love the dark fairy tale you've created here.

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    1. Thank you for hosting and stirring my muse. I do enjoy a fairy tale.

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  7. Lovely and magical. The repetition adds to the story-like tone.

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    1. Thank you Jane, I do feel there is a story to be told.

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  8. I like how it comes full circle.

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  9. Such a beautiful pantoum. I do love them. This poem has such a dreamlike quality. Very lovely.

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  10. Evocative of all that is mystery and moonlight. So enjoyed this.
    ~Dora

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  11. The balance between darkness and hope is so well expressed in the repeated form

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  12. Ooh, both eerie and beautiful.

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    1. Thanks Sandra, a bit of mystique. Where will the adventures take her?

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  13. Love the mysterious and enchanting story here - beautiful pantoum.

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  14. You have sown your own love seed with this one.

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    1. Ha I am a planter of dreams and def believe in the pain and beauty of love.

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  15. Ah, love on the wing will always elicit a sigh. seanatbogie

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  16. "be careful of midnight wishes you seed"
    That's a lesson I certainly learned the hard way.
    Wonderful poem!

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    1. Brings us to the phrase ‘be careful what you wish for’. Learning is a part of life we all go through growing pains.

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  17. To long for true love and find it makes writing these poems a dream come true

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    1. Love & dreams always a good mix for poetry… thanks Spacer Guy

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  18. Enchanting, Truedessa. The warning is appropriate to the situation.

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    1. Thanks may your wishes bring good things your way!

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  19. A perfect pantoum, Trudessa! It read like a dream.

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