Monday, February 6, 2023

Winter Sky - Elusive Wonder

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On a bitter-cold winter night
my heart lets out a heavy sigh
a rare green comet takes flight

the heavens have an endless glow
I wish you were here with me
as the arctic winds begin to blow

some stars are worth waiting for....

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hosted by De writing
a 44 word quadrille incorporating
the word "star"

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Author's note:  I have been trying to view
the green comet in some extreme frigid
temperatures.  It seems elusive...

36 comments:

  1. Thank you for relating your experience. I'd love to see the "Green Comet also, we have cloudy, high level fog, here in the Houston area because of being near the Gulf of Mexico. And it's cold too, Brrr!
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    1. Hi Jim, I tried to view this comet during the arctic cyclone that hit this area, the sky was amazingly clear but, the temperatures were extremely cold and I could only stay outside for a few minutes.

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  2. One thing isn't elusive, this wonderful poem!

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  3. Wonderful. Thanks for reminding me of the comet. I'd forgotten about it. Your poem echoes my own feelings at this time. Suzanne - Mapping Uncertainty

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    1. A rare gem if you can find it out there in the heavens.

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  4. A very nice take on the prompt!

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  5. There's such longing and sadness in this poem. The green comet makes it all the more otherworldly.

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    1. That is the general mood, the elusiveness of something greater than meets the eye, perhaps

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  6. A lovely rhyming quadrille, and I agree that some stars are worth waiting for.

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    1. Kim, yes some stars definitely are worth waiting for...

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  7. You are so right, Truedessa! A beautiful way of getting your thought across...

    ~David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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    1. Thank you David! I wanted to let you know I always read your poems but I have trouble commenting.

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  8. Simple but packs a bunch.
    Rained too much here to see the comet.

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    1. Simplicity against a complex backdrop. I haven’t seen that comet. 🙁

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  9. A "love" quadrille ... the best kind.

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  10. We have yet to spot it, also, here in southern Nevada. I love the double meaning in "star" in your last line.

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    1. Thank you De for the prompt word. That comet is soaring somewhere

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  11. Beautifully rendered, T.

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  12. Beautiful and so fitting for the temps:)

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    1. Hi Sandra, yes February had an extremely cold start.

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  13. A lovely poem about the wonders of the universe. Well done.

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  14. Oh to see the green comment trail across a night sky!

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  15. A wonderful sight! Keep looking up!

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  16. The subtle rhyme gives this sensational poem a charming quality! Nicely done.

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    1. Thank you, I do like a bit of rhyming.

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  17. Oh yes, you know how cold a starry night can be... and rhyming too.

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    1. Starry starry night…
      Paint your palette blue and gray

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  18. Some stars are worth waiting for... So true.

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    1. If only I could touch a star! Thanks blue wherever you are…no matter how far….

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