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| Rhode Island |
The wild waves roll relentlessly
summer winds blow restlessly
reclining in my Tommy Bahama chair
breathing in the fresh salty ocean air
umbrellas tumbling down the beach
overhead rowdy seagulls screech
creating quite a lively rumpus
pondering all the magic
this day may encompass
linking with dVerse - Quadrille #230
hosted by Kim - writing a 44 word quadrille
incorporating the word rumpus
Thank you for visiting and I appreciate your comments
My kind of rumpus. Nature knows how to put on a party.
ReplyDeleteSounds like wise not to bring an umbrella----
ReplyDeleteWonderfully described and cleverly rhymed.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful rumpus, Truedessa. I love the ebb and flow in the shape of the poem, the rhyming couplets, the appeal to the senses – and those ‘umbrellas tumbling down the beach’.
ReplyDeleteUmbrellas tumbling down the beach is certainly a rumpus!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you got to the seaside. You took me there, with your poem.
ReplyDeleteLove it, Truedessa! Great quadrille!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Bravo!!!!
ReplyDeleteLuv that you rhymed
Much♡love
The rhyme, the scene you set for us ~~~ I thoroughly enjoyed True.
ReplyDeleteA delightfully breezy romp on the beach...thanks for taking us there!
ReplyDeleteClever rhyming, Tru!
ReplyDeletelovely!
ReplyDeleteA delightful sense permeates my reading - one that rings true for me, one I seek, the joy of summer, but also of nature.
ReplyDeleteI hope the magic is much!
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