The fresh fallen snow brightens
up the dark grey vista of morning
heavy branches bow in quietness
transformation on a January day
from the bitter cold bareness
to winters warm robe of white
beyond the trees a small band of deer
wandering across the pristine landscape
precision and grace in their movement
leaving tracks connected in the journey
nibbling on emerald green arborvitaes
the only sound is the whisper of the wind
I watch in stillness from the warmth inside
dreaming of making my own imprints
on that wondrous canvas of white
putting on my coat, hat, gloves and boots
venturing outside I lay under blue sky
and make snow angels just for today….
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hosted by Kim write about snow as you see, feel or imagine it, in any form you wish, using clear imagery as crisp as fresh-fallen snow.
I can see you, making snow angels under the sky.
ReplyDeleteSherry, yes I did make one recently and I admit it was fun.
DeleteNothing in the world seemed like more fun when I was growing up than making snow angels after a fresh snowfall. Thank you for jogging my memory. Loved your poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen..they can still be fun to make but, not so easy to stand up...lol
DeleteBeautiful, Trudessa. I love the snow scene you paint with your words!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dwight
DeleteI enjoyed following January's snowy imprints through your poem to snow angels, Truedessa, and love how the ‘heavy branches bow in quietness’, the only sound the whisper of the wind’. A peaceful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim sometimes those branches are so heavy I think they might break and sometimes sadly they do.
DeleteI have not really been that fond of snow angels, but I do love snow in all other respect...
ReplyDeleteHi Bjorn, I know you do love the snow. Perhaps, you could make a snowbird. I sometimes do that you just don't move the legs only the arms to create wings.
DeleteYes, I can see you making snow angels. Just wish I could see snow...
ReplyDeleteHaha - Well, my inner child likes to have fun. You can have some of my snow. I would be happy to share.
DeleteFresh snow is so inviting! Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you and it is beautiful...
DeleteYou painted a beautiful winter scene with your words.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the moment beautifully. The quietness, stillness.
ReplyDeleteYou evoke such peace with your poem, Truedessa. Thank you <3
ReplyDeleteA simple vivid scene that moves from looking to taking part. Nice one 👏
ReplyDeleteA dreamy delight, True. You draw for us an enchanted scene with angels in the snow. 🩵
ReplyDeleteWe need more snow angels, True. It's a fact.
ReplyDeleteBut do tell: How are you?