quiet
silence
feather light
gift from the sky
frayed yet beautiful
tranquility in my soul
pauses in heart beats
embracing airy calmness
where the blue-bird once sang
a wild-winged spirit soaring
hushed are my tears
uplifting stillness
radiating love
welcoming
renewal
peace
and
j
o
y
written for dVerse
hosted by Lillian
writing a 44 word quadrille incorporating "silence"
This is so beautiful and uplifting. I especially love "feather light / gift from the sky". Really raised my spirits.
ReplyDeleteThank you, my friend. It is good to know my words lifted your spirits :)
DeleteTruedessa, I like your feather-shaped poem, which floats so beautifully in the sky.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lisa
DeleteVery creative, Truedessa. I love what you did with the prompt. The poem design is very cool!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dwight I thought of a feather floating in silence and decided to try a shape poem. Difficult to do with 44 words but, it took shape
DeleteI love the sense of journeying within yourself - beautiful - Jae
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae the journey to me always start within....
DeleteLuv the shape of yohr poem and the reward of Joy
ReplyDeleteMuch love
Thank you Gillena - much love back at you
DeleteA delightful shape quadrille, Truedessa, feather light and calming.
ReplyDeleteKim, thank you for your continued support and comments. It was my hope to bring a sense of calming silence.
DeleteAnd your poem is as soft as that feather.
ReplyDeleteThank you, my friend. I am always happy to read your comments.
DeleteBeautiful use of form. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletebeautiful words for the prompt....and envisioned in the shape of a tear. Wonderful! Thank you for posting to the prompt
ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting! I thought of a feather but, it does resemble a teardrop as well.
DeleteWhat a beautiful shape poem! And yes, finding a feather is one of life's joys – like a gift from Heaven.
ReplyDeleteRosemary, I do agree a hawk came to visit me one day and dropped a feather at my feet.
Delete