Friday, June 14, 2013

The Mag 172 Sunday June 9, 2013 Prompt

Charleston Farmhouse Door

gateway

multihued door

whispering promises

nervously inserting the key

freedom

poetry form Cinquain

28 comments:

  1. Freedom you say
    To Bora Bora's bay
    Insert the damn key
    So we can be free!

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    1. Good Morning Pat,

      Inserting the key
      so, we can be free
      away we go on hopes
      & dreams...

      Have a great day!

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    2. But here i am still stuck
      that key has no luck

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    3. well, we need a new plan
      you and I then we
      can get unstuck..
      with a little luck..

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    4. No bank
      Can sell a tank
      Dig for treasure
      that is no pleasure
      Crime is the only way
      Join the fray

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    5. Bora Bora again... He's so obsessed
      It's about time someone confessed
      He can't sleep without the Bora sand
      His kitty litter reminds him of that faraway land
      So he's got this plan to trade me for 10 grand
      I thought he was my friend... I so don't understand :(

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    6. HAR - this cracks me up I feel like I should be in a swashbuckler dress..and you two in pirate clothes. See the image you painted in my mind.

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    7. I agree, Truedessa... that interaction reminds me of that sequence in 'The Princess Bride'...

      ~shoes~

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    8. "The Princess Bride" - Did they say Har in that movie? (lol) Well, instead of pirates clothes..now we need medieval garb..what do you think..should we carry swords as well..touche..

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    9. No... 'Har' is some kind of nonsense between Grumpster and myself... but there were pirates in that movie, so pirate garb would be quite appropriate.

      I think pirates carried rapiers, but I could be wrong...

      ~shoes~

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    10. Shoes

      Isn't a rapier a type of sword? I am not sure who used them perhaps pirates. Thanks for this chat you gave me a good idea for a poem. You know it will be something about love as now you have me thinking Princess Bride & Pirates..

      Well you and grumpster seem to have fun with har and before you know it it will be trendy to say...

      Thanks again..

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    11. Good morning, Truedessa...

      Yes, a rapier is a type of sword. I look forward to seeing and reading your poem about Love.

      Grumpster is a character...

      ~shoes~

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    12. Nonsense between the Grumpster and yourself? Is that a fact? I'm always dead-serious when I say 'HAR!!!' (three exclamation marks, thank you...) Nonsense? NONSENSE?!!! HAR!!!

      A blue pirate... hmmm... with a boat.... hmmm.... going to Bora.... hmmmmm.... bikini's..... WAIT that's enough.

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  2. Beautiful job with the form ... gateway and freedom ~ wonderful words!!!

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    1. Helen,

      Thank you for the lovely note. It made me smile.

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  3. nice job on the form...
    promises & freedom....hope they come true for you
    on the other side of that door...smiles.

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Promises blowing in the wind
      with open ears I will listen
      to it's call...

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  4. gateway, freedom, and new life. Your poem is full of hope. :-)

    ~Imelda

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    1. Hello,

      Thank you...hope has a nice sound.

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  5. Ah, the hopes or secrets that are behind locked doors. Always a risk to open. Sweet.

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    1. Hi,

      Nice to see you again..sometimes we must take a risk a leap of faith to unlock the door to dreams...

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  6. Hi there, Truedessa...

    Did you take this photo? It's fantastic!!! I love it!!

    Thank you for stopping by my place!!!

    ~shoes~

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    1. Hi Shoes,

      Nice to see you here..I cannot take credit for this picture. The picture was provide by the Mag as a prompt. The challenge was to write a poem about the picture. To capture what you felt or saw. I agree it is fantastic and my friends at the Mag always come up with something inspiring.

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  7. All sorts of possibilities could be behind a door like that. Nice!

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    1. Thanks for the comment..one never knows what lies behind doors.

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