Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Lover's Moon

pic taken by me


nestled in nakedness effulgent moon
two ardent  lovers sing romantic songs
melodic lyrics heavenly hearts swoon
shimmering brightly beyond human throngs

lie with me under coverings of night
embracing warm moments,  igniting flesh
play me a song as my spirit takes flight
stroke of midnight soft notes as one we mesh

bodies sway, natural rhythm mating souls
rising passion luminous moonlit sky
pieces of my heart you quietly stole
surrendering in your arms, gentle sigh

somewhere in the heavens a shooting star
crystal rain showers tumble from afar

posted for dVerse..





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59 comments:

  1. MaryJanuary 21, 2014

    A very romantic poem here. Beautiful.

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 21, 2014

      Mary, Thank you as always you are kind..

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  2. emmett wheatfallJanuary 21, 2014

    Poetically romantic. A beautiful poem.

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  3. Brian MillerJanuary 21, 2014

    the moon, the music...all the elements of romance are ready to be set into play....oo la la...barry white is about to step to the mic as well...haha

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 21, 2014

      Brian, that is funny..Well.."Let the Music Play" I just want to dance the night away..

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  4. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 21, 2014

    Oh so romantic........has been a kazillion years since I felt like that. Such beautiful writing. Such beautiful emotions. And oh what a beautiful moon!

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 21, 2014

      Sherry, thanks for the lovely words..I took that pic last week during the full moon to show a friend.

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  5. Alex J. CavanaughJanuary 21, 2014

    Sweet and sexy! A great combination.
    And in response to your comment - thank you! I hope you enjoy my book. (And if you do like romance, the second has a bit of that.)

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 21, 2014

      Thanks Alex..

      I've decided to pick up the first book for my nook I plan to read it this weekend.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2014

    Romantic!

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  7. vb holmesJanuary 21, 2014

    Wonderful word pictures--beautiful..

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 21, 2014

      Thank you for reading..it is appreciated..

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  8. steveroniJanuary 21, 2014

    Some few of these lines evoked for me two lovely birds of the night...until it became clear--those covers!--that it was he and you, dear! How sweet!
    Smiling, I return your
    PEACE and LIGHT!

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Steve,

      I like the thought of the birds..might they be love birds???

      Peace & Light right back at you...

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  9. Pat HattJanuary 21, 2014

    Two as one
    Under the moon they run
    Or just sway
    As there they lay
    And play
    Until the next day

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Under the moon they dream
      glowing under moonbeams..

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  10. Ginny BrannanJanuary 21, 2014

    A lovely sonnet indeed!

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  11. Vandana SharmaJanuary 21, 2014

    A lovely night to be remembered with all delight.

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  12. mrs mediocrityJanuary 21, 2014

    what a beautiful, lovely poem, with such a beautiful, lovely ending!

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Thank you..the ending couplet is my fav..

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  13. One A Day TechJanuary 21, 2014

    Aww that is soo sweeet! :)

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  14. HisFireFlyJanuary 21, 2014

    igniting flesh
    love.that.

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  15. ed pilollaJanuary 22, 2014

    passionate

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Thank Ed..the moon just makes my head swoon..

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2014

    lush and sumptuous ~

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2014

    Loved the imagery, especially- "crystal rain showers tumble from afar". I liked the beauty of the sensuality of your words... warm and it gives a good feeling.
    -HA

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Thank HA I am glad you could feel the passion.

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  18. Steve KingJanuary 22, 2014

    Lush and sensuous. Very satisfying and complete. Fine work.
    Steve K.

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Thank you Steve so kind of you to say..

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  19. ClaudiaJanuary 22, 2014

    smiles...sounds like a wonderful romantic evening...

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      The moon has a wonderful allure about it...

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  20. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2014

    carving a beautiful slice of romantic melon moon..very nice! ~jackie~

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  21. kaykualaJanuary 22, 2014

    Makes one feel young! Romantically inclined and sensuously powerful. Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Hi Hank,

      Thank you..I see you are still #1 at the cat's place..

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  22. ScarletJanuary 22, 2014

    Seductive & love filled night ~ Your sonnet is lovely ~

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  23. Kathy ReedJanuary 22, 2014

    Wonderful night under the moonlight!

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  24. Myrna R.January 22, 2014

    Ahhhhh. So romantic and sensual. Pretty sexy too. You write beautifully of a beautiful night.

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  25. GabriellaJanuary 22, 2014

    Romantic and sensual poem! Lovely closing couplet.

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Thank you Gabriella for lovely words.

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  26. WolfsrosebudJanuary 22, 2014

    a moment of magic

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  27. brudbergJanuary 22, 2014

    Oh with moons and swoon it's always romance love it.

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    1. TruedessaJanuary 22, 2014

      Thanks Bjorn who doesn't enjoy a full moon???

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  28. humbirdJanuary 22, 2014

    Dreaming...I can see those tumbling stars...magical...

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  29. ayalaJanuary 22, 2014

    Beautifully penned!

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  30. One A Day TechJanuary 23, 2014

    Loved it again today :D Thank you for posting on my blog :)

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