Pink Lips
time released pill
swallowing our love whole
digesting each tender moment
relief
time released pill
swallowing our love whole
digesting each tender moment
relief
~
daily
bittersweet dose
love dissolves in my soul
healing regenerates my heart
I mend
bittersweet dose
love dissolves in my soul
healing regenerates my heart
I mend
posted for the Magpie Tales
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I love the analogy of love as a time-released pill. And one that fills us with never-ending endorphins. This is very beautiful. And is there anything that can heal us like love can? I think not :)
ReplyDeleteHi Keith,
DeleteThis was such a lovely comment to read..thank you..
Love always regenerates me!
ReplyDeleteWell, regeneration is a good thing..lifts our spirits to a higher plane.
DeleteLove the poem. Such effective title! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much..
Deletelove def has a way of mending...and it should be taken daily in liberal doses....smiles...
ReplyDeleteThat is does Brian that it does..
DeleteI like the idea of bittersweet love and how it can hurt and mend our heart.
ReplyDeleteLove is like that sometimes..bittersweet..
DeleteSwallowing can be a good thing... ;oD
ReplyDelete~shoes~
Swallowing can be a good thing..
DeleteIs it a good thing if you are swallowing tears?
DeleteAh....
DeleteSure can regenerate and renew the more love that comes due between two
ReplyDeleteThat is true indeed..mending of the heart..
DeleteLoved this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry...
DeleteWow, that is a powerful writing!!! Awesome job:))
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the generous comment..
DeletePhil,
DeleteI tried to leave a message on your blog but, I don't use Google plus. I just wanted to let you know I was there and read both of your poems. Thank you for visiting..
Love dissolves in my soul... I love that line.
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite lines as well blue..
DeleteDare I say... I knew it.
DeleteWonderful take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteIt seems to release some emotions when I howl. The coyotes answer.
Hi Gail, well emotional release is a good thing so I say howl away..smiling..
Deletethe best medicine
ReplyDeleteLove can be the cure..
DeleteI like these sentiments very much. Love is all.
ReplyDeleteThere's no other way to love - but to love whole and to be consumed by it. There is no love in half measures. :-)
ReplyDeleteThat is very true and wise..
DeleteLove is such a powerful source of light, happiness, joy, health and everything else we could ever wish for. I love this poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Beate, May you and Keith always know joy and health..
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