Sunday, June 15, 2014

Through the Glass...


Faceless
 can  you  see  me
concealed  identity 
 no  reproductions ,  uniqueness 
lonely
 
Not To Be Reproduced, 1937, Rene Magritte
smiling
 wearing  my  suit 
 past  the mirrored  image 
 revealing   myself   just   for  you
we  touch  

posted for the Mag 224
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38 comments:

  1. Alex J. CavanaughJune 15, 2014

    Very powerful beginning! You pull in the reader right away and really capture the image.

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    1. TruedessaJune 15, 2014

      Number one tonight..Thanks for visiting :-)

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  2. Pat HattJune 15, 2014

    Faceless but cannot see, until one does and a face shows bringing glee, a reveal just for two, a lot can ensue.

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    1. TruedessaJune 15, 2014

      A day when face to face
      two hearts may embrace..

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  3. Brian MillerJune 15, 2014

    i like the second much more...there is a warmth there...
    the first one i def feel the loneliness...

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    1. TruedessaJune 15, 2014

      Hi Brian,

      Yes, he is lonely until he steps through the glass..then there is warmth waiting..

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  4. GailJune 15, 2014

    Well done. After Alex and Brian I have nothing to add. They said it all.

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    1. TruedessaJune 15, 2014

      Thanks for visiting Gail..always nice to see you here..

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  5. Cait O'ConnorJune 16, 2014

    Two sided mirror.
    Nice one.

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  6. MaryJune 16, 2014

    Both of these are powerful, Truedessa. Each in their own way, they express a bit about what communications on the internet might be for some. (That really IS an eerie photo.)

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    1. TruedessaJune 16, 2014

      Hi Mary,

      I agree the picture is a bit disturbing which provided an interesting prompt.

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  7. Optimistic ExistentialistJune 16, 2014

    I really love the contrast between the two Truedessa. Marvelously done :)

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    1. TruedessaJune 16, 2014

      Thank you so kind of you to say..and thanks for wishing me a Happy Full Moon Day...

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  8. Kathe W.June 16, 2014

    nicely done!

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  9. HelenJune 16, 2014

    Revealing myself just for you ... great line in a lovely poem.

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    1. TruedessaJune 16, 2014

      Thank you Helen..that was my favorite line as well..

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  10. SusanJune 16, 2014

    The touch, more than the back the face the clothes the look-- is too rare. and thus exquisitely beautiful.

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    1. TruedessaJune 16, 2014

      Susan, enjoyed reading your comment..

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  11. brudbergJune 16, 2014

    I see the second one.. like looking deep into the mirror to find someone beyond the borders of the present

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  12. PokeyJune 16, 2014

    Cerebral writing. Nice:))

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  13. Eddie BluelightsJune 16, 2014

    He remains anonymous - but loved both ~ Eddie

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    1. TruedessaJune 16, 2014

      Well, he is revealing himself to someone on the other side????

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  14. GraceJune 16, 2014

    I love both, each unique ~ Funny but I wrote to this picture in the past Mag challenge ~ Have a good week ~

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    1. TruedessaJune 16, 2014

      Hi Grace,

      Thanks for reading..I read this was a prompt a while back but, the first time I've seen it.

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  15. AnonymousJune 16, 2014

    Ah, so lovely :)

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  16. Silent Otto June 17, 2014

    Captured the pathos you have , dear lady !

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  17. kaykualaJune 17, 2014

    A lot of discoveries and perhaps conniving. A faceless image can be looked in as suspicious. But to reveal and to touch may mean lots of emotions for each other. Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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  18. humbirdJune 17, 2014

    Spiritual connection can be like this...

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  19. Tess KincaidJune 21, 2014

    Curious and unique...I like...a lot...

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    1. TruedessaJune 22, 2014

      Thanks Tess for your words and the prompts..

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  20. AnonymousJune 21, 2014

    ah...that is a very creative and romantic response. I like this piece.

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    1. TruedessaJune 22, 2014

      Thank you, I am glad you liked this piece :-)

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