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Monsoon rapidly approaching
Onslaught of waves we ride
Nimbus clouds merging together
Shattering our reality into pieces
Our bodies caught in torrential rain
Overlapping clinging to each other
Night leaves us breathless
posted for dverse writing
poems about Monsoons
The summer thunderstorms of love!
ReplyDeleteSuch a sensuous piece :D
ReplyDeleteI like the togetherness of this poem, not weathering the storm alone. Peace, Linda
ReplyDeleteLove storms....just so very sensual but at the same time, a grand restraint. Most enjoyable. Hayes Spencer is Kanzensakura
ReplyDeleteNice acrostic.
ReplyDeleteAnd what better way to experience a thunder storm
than together.
Nice intimacy.
I love the whole idea of a monsoon. Captured nicely in your poem.
ReplyDeletenow this is the kind of monsoon i get never tired of...
ReplyDeleteOh I love a monsoon like that, we need some cool to seek that special cold.
ReplyDeleteThat is quite lovely indeed!
ReplyDeletea very sensual acrostic! Very lovely!
ReplyDeleteTruedesa, your lines are intense enough to illustrate what monsoon is. The whole piece sounds like a long night, good thing they have each other in this moment of time. Also, I could read this as part of your adventures in the sea with captain Pat. I enjoyed it, as always, thank you!
ReplyDeletealways good to have a friend during a storm
ReplyDeleteHow intense that monsoon can be...I love the acrostic, now that I noticed it ~
ReplyDeleteWhat such storms can do when experienced by two
ReplyDeleteGorgeous.
ReplyDeletewater and passion... - nice
ReplyDeleteApproaching monsoon all in a wonderful acrostic. That's remarkable Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteHank
To live with Nature without clothes
ReplyDeleteof culture is to know better
the strength and warmth
of human heArt.. lighting
soul.. spirit of strength..
warmth of arms
instead
of covered
heArts..
Truest human
Monsoon challenge
is human
heArt..:)
I can feel the frenzy of the moment, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteAh those long duration rains, no matter when, they amaze me all the same. Always leave me breathless
ReplyDeletebeautiful image! the shape gives that feeling of anticipation.
ReplyDeleteExultant, euphoric and cathartic. An awesome piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteBreathless... I hear you.
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