Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Hidden I See























I am a human being
dreaming of a better world
envisioning harmony in life
nymph hidden in a tree
thankful for the here & now
i am a spiritual being
traveling the vast universe
yearning for understanding

Poets United - midweek motif 
writing poetry about identity
pic credit - my own collection
I was taking a walk one day
and came upon this tree...

19 comments:

  1. Truedessa, I think you have defined yourself VERY well! I can see the spiritual side of you in your poetry oftentimes.

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  2. That yearning sure lets one explore as much comes ashore

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  3. Beautifully expressed, my friend, and I like the form, too.

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  4. Yes, that describes you perfectly!

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  5. Hi human, Truedessa,

    Harmony and me, are pretty good company...

    Your spirituality doth emanate a pawsitive glow.

    Pawsitive wishes and doggy kisses,

    Penny xx

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    1. Hi Penny and your human friend Gary...yes I think harmony and you are integrated...

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  6. Finding that harmony is such a wonderful thing.

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  7. Amen! Nymph and human, finding balance. Your title is provocative--true humans see!

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  8. a fantastic acrostic revealing the speaker's identity...lovely write...

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  9. I love it :D beautiful acrostic :D

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  10. your invisibility i can easily identify with; this is a really profound write

    Thanks for dropping in to read mine

    much love...

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  11. Nice. Positive and thoughtful. :-)
    -HA

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  12. I love the title..made me think of how many trees we pass and don't really see and yet they have seen so much..to be quiet and still and observe - and hope for better is a wonderful quality

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  13. I love the title and the spirituality of your words. They resonate with me. The picture and the poem make a beautiful combination.

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  14. With you, I yearn for understanding. Sometimes I'm close, and sometimes I'm not!

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  15. Spiritual being with great causes. Beautiful, Truedessa.

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    1. me too blue...maybe one day they will come true..

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