Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Bubbles















sinking naked into her little oasis
daily strife slowly fizzles away
in a blue sea of foaming bubbles
drifting towards a flower filled
paradise, relaxing to soft music
inhaling rosebuds and lime trees
a poetess bravely dares to dream
please don't burst her bubble

posted for dVerse
Quadrille 3 - 44 words using
the word bubble.
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35 comments:

  1. De JacksonFebruary 23, 2016

    YES. So much yes. Love the fizzle and foaming and flower filled peace of this bubbly piece.

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 23, 2016

    It sounds lovely........yes, dont burst the bubble!!!!

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  3. Dr. Vandana SharmaFebruary 24, 2016

    it is so nice to live in her own bubble and I join iN your plea not to break it..

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 24, 2016

      A bubble world full of wonder I imagine..

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  4. kaykualaFebruary 24, 2016

    a poetess bravely dares to dream
    please don't burst her bubble

    Let her bask in the pleasures of wonderful dreams which are hard to come by. Let her be Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 24, 2016

      Smiling Hank, sometimes one just has to be...

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  5. brudbergFebruary 24, 2016

    Oh ... i think this is a bubble I would love to have... no never break it.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 24, 2016

      Thanks Bjorn, it would be a delightful bubble ...

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  6. UnknownFebruary 24, 2016

    Sounds lovely. Glad you didn't end this with a kid banging on the bathroom door :-)

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 24, 2016

      haha - no I can enjoy some peace and quiet and just dream...

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  7. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 24, 2016

    Keep dreaming! I won't burst your bubble.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 24, 2016

      Hi Alex,

      I know you wouldn't...I could just float off into space...

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 24, 2016

    May you bubble happily!

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  9. Walter J. WojtanikFebruary 24, 2016

    Float, float on! Keep bubbling along!

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  10. GailFebruary 24, 2016

    A good place to dream...

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  11. Pat HattFebruary 24, 2016

    Let those dreams bubble on up

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  12. Magaly GuerreroFebruary 24, 2016

    Thanks for the bubble bath! Imagery scented with pure yum. ♥

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  13. GraceFebruary 24, 2016

    No I won't ~ Enjoy the peace & bubbles ~ Thanks for playing along Truedessa ~

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 26, 2016

      Yw - always fun to join in a fun prompt.

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  14. MaryFebruary 24, 2016

    Oh, so true...we poets do NOT need our bubbles burst! We need to keep believing......

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 26, 2016

      Mary, that is true we poets like to live in our bubble world

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  15. klahanieFebruary 24, 2016

    Hey again, Truedessa!

    Your bubble will never burst
    I would not think the worst
    Bubbly Gary floats by
    With a smile and a sigh....

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 26, 2016

      floating by in a bubble
      with a sudsy smile...

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2016

    You have described it so well...a place of peace, serenity and sometimes the beginnings of great poetry.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 26, 2016

      That is true...I need a bit of peace now and then

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  17. Katie Mia FrederickFebruary 25, 2016

    SMiLes..
    dream bubble
    never bursts
    as long
    as iT
    sImply
    moveS in
    Balance air..:)

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 26, 2016

      may those bubble continue to overflow...

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  18. VictoriaFebruary 25, 2016

    Ah, sigh! Love the reference to the poetess!

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