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please, just one more dream
will you bestow a precious rose
let us sing, under moonbeams
silent memories, dying scream
tears of sorrow, has time froze
please, just one more dream
songs drift along the stream
from your lips, a melody flows
let us sing, under moonbeams
healing pools, eyes softly gleam
thorns no longer pierce, love grows
please, just one more dream
heartfelt prose, key words redeem
rays of light, celestial spirits glow
let us sing, under moonbeams
in a slumber, all is not as it seems
i wish not for love to decompose
please, just one more dream
let us sing, under moonbeams
sharing with Poets United
Authors note:
My poem was inspired by
This Place by Martin Kloess
Hi Truedessa - how lovely ... one more dream and let us sing under moonbeams ... gorgeous to read - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHi Hilary,
DeleteThanks for visiting, may your dreams come true!
Another dream for that love to take hold.
ReplyDeleteThe melody does indeed flow!
Ah, to awaken to that one dream!
DeleteA flow all aglow as one more dream creeps in to show
ReplyDeleteOne more dream to add to the landscape!
Deletelet us sing, under moonbeams... such a beautiful thought!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletehealing pools, eyes softly gleam
ReplyDeletethorns no longer pierce, love grows
please, just one more dream
Such wonderful lines ❤️
Thanks Sanaa!
DeleteOh yes, please, "just one more dream". Sign me up!! This is beautiful, my friend.
ReplyDeleteSmiling - yes, your place of dream is waiting for you, may it be so!
DeleteI feel this way sometime after a good dream. Yes, 'one more dream' indeed! Lovely sentiments expressed so well, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteMary, sometimes I don't want to wake up as the dream is so wonderful.
DeleteI think maybe that nourishing memories can be a way to find hope... those dreams can be fulfilled.
ReplyDeleteAre we dreaming to our awakening or awakening to our dreams?
DeleteThe repetition certainly adds a dreamy quality to this poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, this is a form I like to use from time to time.
DeleteTruly beautiful - and a fine tribute to Martin's work.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I was visiting Martin's blog and my muse was inspired so I ran with it.
DeleteYour words took me to thoughts of death - a dying one asking for one more dream under moonbeams. Your words touched me and I think they are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHi Myrna,
DeleteThat is an interesting perspective, as often those with illness long for that dream or last wish.
Yup! I have had my last dream and now living it and sleep peacefully at night... who would have guessed? :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
ZQ, How wonderful that you have your dream and are living it. :-) may all you nights be peaceful!
DeleteI really dig the cadence and flow of this piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks Brother Ollie, it does sort of roll...
DeleteThank you! I'm so honored by this.
ReplyDeleteWhat a magnificent dream
Thank you Martin for your words as that inspired my muse and brought forth one more dream!
DeleteYou've done a masterful job of imbuing One More Dream with such a lovely otherworldly, dreamy aura. So many beautiful lines in this. "rays of light, celestial spirits glow let us sing, under moonbeams" ... exquisite.
ReplyDeleteWendy, I am smiling as it is always a pleasure to read your words.
DeleteSuch a wonderful dream to have!! I am sure that Martin is deeply honored to have inspired such beautiful work from you
ReplyDeleteThanks Audrey, I think many of wish for one more great dream in life.
DeleteRoses and dreams go together like love and marriage.
ReplyDeleteAh, the allure of dreams, one never knows where they will go. Thanks for visiting.
DeleteI feel hopeful reading this, Truedessa. That "one more dream" testifies that we have never-ending dreams to aspire as long as we are alive.
ReplyDeleteLove the rhymes and the rhythm all throughout.
Totomai - I believe we all have one more dream as long as we are alive. The dreams may change during the course of life, but yes I like to believe we all have one more dream. Thanks for visiting.
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DeleteLuv this whimsical write, thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Standard
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thanks Gillena
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DeleteYour amazing I always wondered how to people write such beautiful poems Ive tried and it don't make sense lol my poems are BADDD! :-D Thank you so much for sharing this with us.. :-) Have a lovely day! Visit me whenever you have time www.its-dominica.blogspot.co.uk kisses Dominica! xXx
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Very heartfelt and genuine.
ReplyDeleteI would settle for just one dream. A non-violent one, please.
ReplyDeleteLet tonight be the night you dream of wondrous things.
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