springboard me among the stars
spiraling around in heavenly flight
sending earth, my fondest regards
passing through worlds of light
sprinkling stardust, healing scars
earthlings slumber, dreams of night
quietly slipping past portal guards
winged dragon, mysterious knight
slaying hearts in a cosmic courtyard
posted for dVerse
writing a quadrille 44 words
including the word spring
I liked the dragon and knight busy while the earthlings sleep.
ReplyDeleteThe mystic world awakens!
DeleteI love your opening "springboard me among the stars"...and you take us on an exciting journey.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting, I am glad you enjoyed the brief journey.
DeleteBeautiful. I love the stardust healing scars. And have a huge soft spot for dragons. Always.
ReplyDeleteI too have a soft spot for dragons and always will.
DeleteWhat a wonder-full little piece. "sending earth, my fondest regards" - brought a smile ... definitely the way to springboard to the stars.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wendy, earth will always be dear..
DeleteI love that dragon and the stars. Magic
ReplyDeleteI somehow knew you might.
Deletepassing through worlds of light
ReplyDeletesprinkling stardust, healing scars
earthlings slumber, dreams of night
Would have been a thrilling cosmic journey through the Universe, True!
Hank
Hi Hank,
DeleteIf only, it was possible.
That's a great opening line: 'springboard me among the stars' and I so enjoy anything with dragons!
ReplyDeleteDragons hold a special place for those who believe...
DeleteThat is one of your most beautiful pieces ever. All of the universe is their courtyard.
ReplyDeleteAlex, thank you so much! I am most honored you enjoyed my poem.
DeleteI feel transposed in a fantasy land, perhaps Middle Earth and beyond...
ReplyDeleteto Middle Earth and beyond, there are no limits..
Deletepassing through worlds of light
ReplyDeletesprinkling stardust, healing scars
earthlings slumber, dreams of night
quietly slipping past portal guards
Beautifully calming!! I love this so much!❤️
Thank you Sanaa..may you leave with peace..
DeleteMagical words depicting a nighttime fantasy. One I will want to return to time after time. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThank you, please do visit again..
DeleteA place where much comes true as on a cosmic level things shine true. Could be quite the story too.
ReplyDeleteA story you say, perhaps one day...
DeleteAstral Travel?
ReplyDeleteCould be?
Delete"sprinkling stardust, healing scars"
ReplyDeleteLuv that image, thanks for dropping in to read mine
much love...
You are most welcome, I enjoy your blog.
Deletemuch love to you as well...
You must be a cosmic lifeform, one that can survive in space, see and identify objects in the red uv radiation spectrum and no oxygen! Now thats impressive.
ReplyDeleteWell, that made me smile a unique specimen of some kind :)
DeleteWonderful opening line that worked as a springboard into the rest of a delightful poem.
ReplyDeletea springboard to another realm, through the eyes of a poet..
DeleteThis has such a dream-like quality to it. I love that. I've never dreamt I was flying, which I hear is weird, but I can picture it perfectly in this poem.
ReplyDeleteA cosmic courtyard... Very nice.
ReplyDeleteLovely imaginative response Truedessa ~ The first line is my favorite ~
ReplyDeleteThis... is art.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favs! Purely magical!! Big Hugs!
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