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| "Who are we... I don't knoooooooooooooooooooow!" (sing along!) |
by Truedessa and Blue
Blue and Truedessa — who are we in this earthly show?
Do you wonder what is out there beyond passing clouds?
Is there an oasis with blue skies, a place for dreamers to go,
A refuge for wandering souls to stay as long as time allows?
Ah time's a crooked thing, Miss Blue — don't trust it for a second.
As days rush by, you think they're minutes ever since life first beckoned.
And what a life it is, this earthly show, filled with stars, and us,
Hired by the day to play some part, wondering what it is we do
Or who we are supposed to be.
We dream, we discuss, we count the clouds until the count is lost,
We feel small and yet so big; our voice is clear, our eyes don't lie,
And still we sense we do not see, and at what cost?
A refuge would be quite the treat.
If souls exist, I'm sure you'll find your seat.
Do you believe beyond the sky river awaits a golden castle,
Where knights and their ladies dance to a minstrel's song
Waltzing in blades of grass, no longer fighting earthly battles?
Would we behold a place of true heart, a place for us to belong?
Believe I don't. My show is here, and it's enough.
No sequels for this movie buff,
This actor, this dreamer of dreams and more,
This earthly knight when eyes are shut,
This dancer among dancers galore,
This believer in the here and now,
This earthly show, this time to bow
and take it all in: a dream that might come true.
Who are we?
Who are we supposed to be?
Don't say our show was called The Unremarkable Two.
Believe I don't. My show is here, and it's enough.
No sequels for this movie buff,
This actor, this dreamer of dreams and more,
This earthly knight when eyes are shut,
This dancer among dancers galore,
This believer in the here and now,
This earthly show, this time to bow
and take it all in: a dream that might come true.
Who are we?
Who are we supposed to be?
Don't say our show was called The Unremarkable Two.
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sharing with Poets United
sharing with Poets United
Author's Note: Blue and I decided to work on a collaboration, the artwork belongs to him. Look, I am flying in the desert as he plays a magical tune :)
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Please check out his blog as well!
Peace, Light and love!
"Who are we... I don't knoooooooooooooooooooow!" (sing along!)
"Who are we... enjoying life's shooooooooooooow!"(sing along!)
"Who are we...we're distant stars all aglooooooooooow!"
(sing along!)
"And what a life it is, this earthly show, filled with stars, and us," This is a beautifully gorgeous line and the fulcrum point of the poem to me. Also love the 'sky river' image.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumana, Blue does have a way with words!
DeleteNot like you
DeleteIt is true
What a lovely collaboration. Very cool. I will go check out Blue's blog. Thanks, Truedessa. This was a delight to read.
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend, we need to catch up!
DeleteI really like the conversation, the way the voices (and the speakers' beliefs) work together.
ReplyDeleteThank you! It is a pleasure to share our voices and inner thoughts.
DeleteFlying to a tune you are...
ReplyDeleteDon't stray too far
Though you'd make me cheer
Far or near :)
I always enjoy a good tune
Deletealong with pieces of the sun
and golden slices of the moon
Thank you for giving me flight
in my dreams of night...
Are you singing Blue?
DeleteSinging in my mind
Deletebeing the quiet kind
Thanks for making me smile with your post - great stuff!
ReplyDeleteGlad it brought a smile to you :)
DeleteLovely collaboration. Made me smile.
ReplyDeleteSmile are good and makes the post worthwhile..,
DeleteBahhhhhhhhhh Blue, how could you? A redo. Shame on you two. lol it was almost a repost but there is a one word difference. Blue is supposed to be a non reboot. He failed. Never getting his shoe. Okay, I'm done. Nicely spun indeed. Bah, said that twice. Now you have me doing it. Outta here!
ReplyDeleteHe posted first so technically he didn't reboot..lol.. one word difference., which is that lol..
DeleteI Don't on yours where Believe I Don't on his. The cat catches that biz!
DeleteA redo?
DeleteLike a rebooted Scooby Doo?
Say it ain't so
At your furry cat show....
Hahaha maybe a reboot
Would that make you hoot?
Shame on us
Now, don't cuss... lol
A truly fascinating dance.
ReplyDeleteA dance with words is always an adventure
DeleteA wonderful collaboration and loved the illustration too....the message is one I often ask....maybe we all ask at some point....why are we here?
ReplyDelete'And what a life it is, this earthly show, filled with stars, and us,
Hired by the day to play some part, wondering what it is we do
Or who we are supposed to be.'
I think we all ask that question trying to find purpose in the journey of life.
DeleteNeeding purpose is the human way
DeleteNight and day...
Something noble to be able to present a collaboration. And what has life to offer anyway! Great word craft True!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank, Blue thinks deep!
DeleteHank!
DeleteThe one and only Poetry Tank
Still number one'
Such fun!
My goodness this is good!!❤️ Especially love; "Ah time's a crooked thing, Miss Blue — don't trust it for a second. As days rush by, you think they're minutes ever since life first beckoned." Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteBlue does think deep, time can be a crooked thing.
DeleteI was the first line I wrote...
DeleteAnd it was wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex!
DeleteThe Ninja Guy
DeleteLikes to fly
Like a dragon in the sky...
So cool! Two become one on this joyful journey.
ReplyDeleteThanks Martin, it was fun!
DeleteWhat a wonderfully unique collaboration. The two of you worked this SOOO artfully, and I admire that.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, this is actually our 3rd one. You can see the others on my page to the right.
DeleteA wonderful collaborative piece!
ReplyDelete'Is there an oasis with blue skies, a place for dreamers to go, A refuge for wandering souls to stay as long as time allows?'
Sadly - I fear not. But what a lovely prospect to visit for a bit.
Let us hope there is a refuge somewhere Wendy!
DeleteWhat a delightful game! I love collaborations.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary, they are fun as you don't know where the writing will go.
DeleteTrue and Blue...a good combo:)
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming duo..smiles..
DeleteLoved this so much! It was AWESOME!
ReplyDeletethank you Crystal! How are you?
DeleteWhat a heartwarming blend, like peanut butter on bread. The expressions flow effortlessly and it was such a delight to read. Greetings!
ReplyDeleteGreetings - thank you for this warm comment. Now, why do I want a cup of tea and toast with peanut butter?
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