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opening the canvas of her mind
leaving old memories behind
riding tides of love, tis her choice
listening for the tones of his voice
dreams sail beyond the horizon
whispering into the vast silence
heart awash, floating in new hope
seeing beyond the human scope
leaving old memories behind
riding tides of love, tis her choice
listening for the tones of his voice
dreams sail beyond the horizon
whispering into the vast silence
heart awash, floating in new hope
seeing beyond the human scope
lulled by the gulls, oceanic tune
singing under a clementine moon
she reaches for a pearly dream
awakening in heavens gleam
singing under a clementine moon
she reaches for a pearly dream
awakening in heavens gleam
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I love the floating of new hope, and the clementine moon. Very beautiful. Spring is time to sing this new song.
ReplyDeleteI hope spring arrives a bit early, I am tired of the cold weather.
DeleteI was lulled into wondrous dream as I read each line rich in imagery...
ReplyDelete'singing under a clementine moon
she reaches for a pearly dream'
Thank you Donna..
DeleteSweet dream...
ReplyDeleteZQ
May all dreams be good ones ZQ
DeleteLove the last part... I wish for such dreams.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bjorn - dreams are a sweet escape and one can hope to reach for that pearl of hope.
DeleteHi human, True,
ReplyDeleteSuch wondrous words that put me in the frame. Thank you, my pawetic human friend.
Pawsitive wishes,
Penny 😀🐶
haha - I enjoy your humorous frame of mind.
DeleteOh, what a gorgeous extended metaphor!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary! The artwork just spoke to me.
DeleteThis is a beautiful poem that enhances the painting. Made me drift into hopeful dreams of my own.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myrna - sometimes we find inspiration within the frames of artwork.
DeleteWow!!!how i luv thag clemantine moon
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my blog today
Much💚love
Thanks Gillena - How sweet that moon is ;)
DeleteShe sure has dreams that reach far, such an awakening can open the eyes of all.
ReplyDeleteAwakening in a sea of dreams..who knows where the tide will roll in...
DeleteI really like how you were inspired by this painting...let the dreams sail on! Where would we be without them.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary ~ I am a dreamer at heart..we all need dreams to hold on to.
DeleteBoy, the last stanza is sure stunning.
ReplyDeletesweet, sweet write!
ReplyDeleteAudrey - thanks for visiting and commenting
DeleteMesmerizing cadence and - once again - a stellar job with the rhyme. Love the stunning intermingling here of images (heavens, lunar, the oceanic. dreams) that imbue the piece with a quality of transcendence.
ReplyDeleteWendy ~ you are too kind, I so enjoy reading your comments. Thank you!
DeleteI believe the ocean is always a good place to search for dreams.
ReplyDeleteI agree Rob!
Deleteshe reaches for a pearly dream
ReplyDeleteawakening in heavens gleam
Dreams of love can be expected to come at any time! It is just that one continues to be dreaming to create the opportunity!
Hank
Love this especially; "heart awash, floating in new hope seeing beyond the human scope."💞 Beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteI am a big fan of hope...and your poem.
ReplyDelete"she reaches for a pearly dream
ReplyDeleteawakening in heavens gleam"
You have such a way with words Truedessa! You are truly gifted! Big Hugs!