 |
| sunrise - wikimedia |
In an early morning dew
tired, she awoke feeling blue
in silence, she murmured, "why"
in an airbrushed sky, a gentle reply
take in the view, open your eyes
over the horizon, your dragon flies
in brilliant hues, her heart sighed
"thank-you", she replied
Quadrille #50 for dVerse
We are writing a 44 word poem
incorporating the word murmur
Brilliant indeed!
ReplyDeleteYour dragon flies for you.
Love all that rhyme, and that dragon sky.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely, the image of a dragon fly......smiles.
ReplyDeleteFlying and lighting the way to a brighter day.
ReplyDeleteThe sky and the dragonfly as like entities..nice.
ReplyDeleteLove this... especially the dragon.
ReplyDeleteI like the recommendation in "take in the view, open your eyes" as a response to feeling blue.
ReplyDeleteEvocative as always. I especially liked: over the horizon, your dragon flies in brilliant hues, her heart sighed
ReplyDelete"thank-you", she replied
Question: Did the open strip to view the 'glass' in the boat run the length of the bottom or was it only halfway where you had to get up to see it if you weren't sitting in the right spot?
Dragon fly is such good medicine. Lovely stuff.
ReplyDeleteLooking at the sky’s magnificence can often calm the questioning mind.
ReplyDeleteStunning photo. I love those colors. “Airbrushed sky” indeed.
ReplyDeleteTruly beautiful! Love this! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous!!💖
ReplyDelete