Thursday, August 29, 2019

Reaching for a Star

courtesy of Pixabay


She once reached for a shimmering star
stretching her heartstrings from afar
traveling the sky-way from here to there
inhaling the promises of the night air

celestial navigator transcending time
penning coordinates in lyrical rhyme
searching for a pilot on silver wings
out in the heavens a songbird sings

on dragon breath adventures flew
seeking paradise somewhere new
holding on to treasured dreams
would dawn bring sunlight's gleam

slumbering under a sturgeon moon
time drifts away in coastal sand dunes
desires of the heart awaken at night
kissing the last remnants of daylight

across the heavens a shooting flame
passion soars, love remains untamed
riding the crest of breaking waves
weary souls rest, tired and brave...


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16 comments:

  1. Isn't this just how beautiful love can be...

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  2. Hi Truedessa - just a wonderful poem ... gorgeous concepts here - thank you ... loved it - cheers Hilary

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  3. Beautiful flow. I like these simple ones that flow like a real story.
    Pat Hatt on a Dragon?

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  4. Those dragons sure can be tough to tame haha much to see in the night.

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  5. I like the rhyming pattern in this piece. It really made the poem flow effortlessly. Well written.

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  6. Such a dreamscape. I specially love this part:

    celestial navigator transcending time
    penning coordinates in lyrical rhyme
    searching for a pilot on silver wings
    out in the heavens a songbird sings

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  7. Sounds like a great full life of adventure and love! tired and brave...what better ending!

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  8. Richly coloured reverie that offers us an escape from reality...

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  9. It’s amazing what romance can do, reaching for stars, stretching heartstrings and dragon breath adventures. It’s wonderful when it works out. Beautiful poem.

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  10. Oh this is absolutely stunning!!❤️❤️

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  11. This is a powerful passionate write True — excellent!

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  12. A beautiful write that is light-hearted and timeless at the same time. I love the photo you chose to go with your poem. I like the rhythm of your poem also.

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  13. I like the thought of adventures flying on dragon breath.

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  14. This poem is easily recognized as yours, Truedessa. Wonderful work with the rhyme and meter.

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  15. I love the dragon (your hallmark along with the stars and the moon) but that sturgeon moon is perfect... (though it makes me think of caviar)

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  16. My favorite lines are:

    desires of the heart awaken at night
    kissing the last remnants of daylight

    Very nice verse, thanks.

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