Monday, February 10, 2020

Fill Me

courtesy of Pixabay

 fill my eyes
so I might see
heaven's light

fill my ears
so I might hear
music

fill my tongue
so I might taste
life's fullness

fill my heart
so I might feel
true love

fill my nostrils
so, I might smell
nature's gifts

written for dVerse 
writing a Quadrille of 44 words
incorporating the word fill 
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18 comments:

  1. Love the evoking of all the senses in this.

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  2. A wonderful plea.

    Much💝love

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  3. I too love the way you've evoked all the senses.

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  4. Letting all the senses come into being sure is the way

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  5. A poem of sensory delight!

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  6. Beautiful way to cover all five senses.

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  7. This reminds me of the Sarum prayer.

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  8. A lovely ‘filling.’

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  9. A lot of feelings to be filled and fulfilled. Great thinking, True!

    Hank

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  10. Of our senses, I wonder...if I had to choose just one.

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  11. I think this is what leads to fulfillment

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    1. Fulfillment - That should have been my title.

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  12. A prayer, both plaintive and hopeful.

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  13. Beautiful wishes and may they all be fulfilled.

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  14. I like the many requests to be filled.

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  15. Beautiful! I love how you evoke all the senses.

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  16. prayerful evocations. May we all be filled.

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  17. This is prayer for light and love!

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