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fill my eyes
so I might see
heaven's light
fill my ears
so I might hear
music
fill my tongue
so I might taste
life's fullness
fill my heart
so I might feel
true love
fill my nostrils
so, I might smell
nature's gifts
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writing a Quadrille of 44 words
incorporating the word fill
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Love the evoking of all the senses in this.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful plea.
ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
I too love the way you've evoked all the senses.
ReplyDeleteLetting all the senses come into being sure is the way
ReplyDeleteA poem of sensory delight!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful way to cover all five senses.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the Sarum prayer.
ReplyDeleteA lovely ‘filling.’
ReplyDeleteA lot of feelings to be filled and fulfilled. Great thinking, True!
ReplyDeleteHank
Of our senses, I wonder...if I had to choose just one.
ReplyDeleteI think this is what leads to fulfillment
ReplyDeleteFulfillment - That should have been my title.
DeleteA prayer, both plaintive and hopeful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful wishes and may they all be fulfilled.
ReplyDeleteI like the many requests to be filled.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love how you evoke all the senses.
ReplyDeleteprayerful evocations. May we all be filled.
ReplyDeleteThis is prayer for light and love!
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