Tuesday, October 20, 2020

Guardian of the Night

Heart, Moon, Night Sky, Love, Thoughts
courtesy of Pixabay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In moonlit yellow dream
 between cat-tails
   blue guardian, remains
    untouched deep

     darkness whispers
      solitudes wish
       heaven bound

        beyond the veil
          harps & lutes
           spiritual songs
             mourns hope
              born yesterday

           palmed rose
            sharp thorns
              beauty & pain
               cosmic souls

                in the hearts brow
                 one can truly see
                   what is essential
                        "love"


linking with dVerse

hosted by Laura


She wants us to select exactly five of the “charms” from a list taken from the poem The pale Impromptu

Dim Accuracy; Candle salve; Consumed moon;
Eyes jealousy; Fouls deviation; Grey life;  
Hearts brow; Lucid farrows; Nulling marrows;
Painted mirth; Pale heat; Palmed rose;
Pearls from tissue; Pellucid quest; Royal flesh;
Skulls of saints; Slime pigments; Spiritual songs;
Solitudes wish; Times chant; Yellow dreams;

I chose the following,

 spiritual songs, yellow dream, hearts brow, palmed rose, solitudes wish

28 comments:

  1. Very nicely done! I like the format of your poem.

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  2. So beautiful. I like the format, too. It adds to the content. Beautiful words.

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    1. Thank you Sherry, the visual presentation either descends or ascends depending on perspective, fragmentations of life and death

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  3. LOVEly phrases strung like pearls!

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  4. Such a beautiful shape to your poem. The Little Prince would agree with your last stanza <3

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    1. There is wisdom in “The Little Prince” and I love a good story!

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  5. I agree with Lisa, your poem has a beautiful shape and progression, Truedessa.

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    1. Thanks Kim,

      Do words shape our thoughts or do shapes create images of thought?

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  6. I enjoyed the flow and your skill in incorporation the phrases given.

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    1. Thank you Francis, simply constructed fragmented thoughts the missing pieces are up the interpretation.

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  7. you have shaped this poem so well and I especially liked the opener - the visuals are lovely:-
    "In moonlit yellow dream
    between cat-tails
    blue guardian, remains
    untouched deep"

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    1. Thank you Laura, the prompt was interesting!

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  8. That's a wonderful way to depict it.

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    1. Thank you ayala! Nice to see you again.

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  10. I love how you connected the palmed rose with the thorns... love hurts.

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    1. Bjorn, it indeed hurts sometimes it is just too painful

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  11. Because the night belongs to lovers...

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  12. This is gorgeously rendered! Love the shape of the poem and how seamlessly you have incorporated the charms 💝

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  13. You wove your word choices in purrfectly. Though, of course, I'm not surprised:)

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    1. Thank you Sandra always nice to see you here.

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  14. A connection like no other as you weaved your words.

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