Tuesday, November 24, 2020

Cluster

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cluster of heavenly stars
counting seven in the night
cupping moonlight in my hand
consciousness a state of mind

contemplating other worlds
courageous, I drift to sleep
collecting stars, saving dreams
 
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Pick a ONE-WORD TITLE  then write a SEVEN-LINE poem of SEVEN SYLLABLES  whereby each line begins with the FIRST LETTER of your title.
 
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30 comments:

  1. LucyNovember 24, 2020

    Ooh, I really like this. Very dream-like. :)

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  2. Dwight L. RothNovember 24, 2020

    Very nice poem. I agree... consciousness a state of mind

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thanks Dwight and yes, it is indeed a state of mind.

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  3. kaykualaNovember 25, 2020

    Very cleanly performed True! Love the 'C' appearance throughout!

    Hank

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thanks Hank, I can see clearly now, the rain has gone. Why is that refrain in my head now?

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  4. IngridNovember 25, 2020

    A delightful wander through the landscape of dreams!

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thanks Ingrid I do enjoy a bit of wandering.

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  5. Mrityunjay DixitNovember 25, 2020

    "collecting stars, saving dreams" wow. awesome poem!

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thank you, saving dreams for those who have lost theirs.

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  6. Kim M. RussellNovember 25, 2020

    I love the idea of collecting stars and saving dreams!

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thanks Kim, so many dreams need saving...

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  7. Alex J. CavanaughNovember 25, 2020

    Distinct rules for that one but you pulled off a beautiful poem!

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thanks Alex, it may have been challenging but, I think I said what I felt I needed to.

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  8. Jane DoughertyNovember 25, 2020

    Lovely final line!

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  9. Gillena CoxNovember 25, 2020

    Very lovely poem

    Much🖤love

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thanks Gillena for stopping over to read!

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  10. brudbergNovember 25, 2020

    Oh I would love to have such stars in my dream

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Smiling tonight look for some stars when you close the curtains of your eyes.

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  11. KerfeNovember 25, 2020

    I like especially that final line.

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Thank you, we need to save those precious dreams

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  12. Pat HattNovember 25, 2020

    Sure a dream to hold onto indeed or stay within

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      ha - I do enjoy a good dream especially with stars and the heavens.

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  13. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 25, 2020

    So lovely, the collecting of stars, and saving of dreams.

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    1. TruedessaNovember 25, 2020

      Hi Sherry, may all your dreams come true...

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  14. lynn__November 25, 2020

    Now I'm curious about courageously drifting to sleep :)

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  15. robkistnerNovember 26, 2020

    This was captivating true, and such a great picture.

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  16. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comNovember 26, 2020

    Love the illustration and these lines the most
    I drift to sleep
    collecting stars, saving dreams
    This entire poem just has a lilt to it! Nicely done.

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  17. MaryNovember 26, 2020

    I love this. Such a peaceful and ethereal poem!

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  18. Sandra CoxNovember 26, 2020

    Counting stars. What a lovely way to fall asleep.
    Happy Thanksgiving.

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