Tuesday, November 24, 2020

Cluster

7 Possible Reasons Why You're Having Whacked Out Dreams | Women's Health
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cluster of heavenly stars
counting seven in the night
cupping moonlight in my hand
consciousness a state of mind

contemplating other worlds
courageous, I drift to sleep
collecting stars, saving dreams
 
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Pick a ONE-WORD TITLE  then write a SEVEN-LINE poem of SEVEN SYLLABLES  whereby each line begins with the FIRST LETTER of your title.
 
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30 comments:

  1. Ooh, I really like this. Very dream-like. :)

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  2. Very nice poem. I agree... consciousness a state of mind

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    1. Thanks Dwight and yes, it is indeed a state of mind.

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  3. Very cleanly performed True! Love the 'C' appearance throughout!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks Hank, I can see clearly now, the rain has gone. Why is that refrain in my head now?

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  4. A delightful wander through the landscape of dreams!

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    1. Thanks Ingrid I do enjoy a bit of wandering.

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  5. "collecting stars, saving dreams" wow. awesome poem!

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    1. Thank you, saving dreams for those who have lost theirs.

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  6. I love the idea of collecting stars and saving dreams!

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    1. Thanks Kim, so many dreams need saving...

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  7. Distinct rules for that one but you pulled off a beautiful poem!

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    1. Thanks Alex, it may have been challenging but, I think I said what I felt I needed to.

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  8. Very lovely poem

    Much🖤love

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    1. Thanks Gillena for stopping over to read!

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  9. Oh I would love to have such stars in my dream

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    1. Smiling tonight look for some stars when you close the curtains of your eyes.

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  10. I like especially that final line.

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    1. Thank you, we need to save those precious dreams

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  11. Sure a dream to hold onto indeed or stay within

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    1. ha - I do enjoy a good dream especially with stars and the heavens.

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  12. So lovely, the collecting of stars, and saving of dreams.

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    1. Hi Sherry, may all your dreams come true...

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  13. Now I'm curious about courageously drifting to sleep :)

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  14. This was captivating true, and such a great picture.

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  15. Love the illustration and these lines the most
    I drift to sleep
    collecting stars, saving dreams
    This entire poem just has a lilt to it! Nicely done.

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  16. I love this. Such a peaceful and ethereal poem!

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  17. Counting stars. What a lovely way to fall asleep.
    Happy Thanksgiving.

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