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Awakening from sacred dreams of night
what mysterious sound or spoken word
would break the mourning silence
would it be birdsong or rain-song
would I sing along in the magic
would it be fair to ask for joy
when all I feel is sadness
linking with dVerse
Writing a 44 word quadrille
incorporating the word "fair"
The Greek word 'kledon' refers to the first sounds you hear coming from silence.
I love the flow of your words. Thanks for the new word!
ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting. I found this word recently and i have been pondering it in my life.
DeleteAh. What a poignant write.
ReplyDeleteHappy Monday Truedessa
Much💛love
Thank you Gillena!
DeleteHave a happy week.
A great sadness, yes....powerful poem..
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteAmazing poem. The gorgeous flow of lines makes the closing all the more heart-wrenching.
ReplyDeletepax,
dora
Thank you, Dora
DeleteI love your wake up reflections and questions... Always expect a fair day!
ReplyDeleteDwight, one can hope for a fair day. Thanks for reading.
DeleteBeautiful imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you
Deletesad but so beautiful, Truedessa.
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David [ben Alexander]
Ah perhaps the beauty can break the sadness.
DeleteI feel this one. Strange how many of us have written about sadness and loss.
ReplyDeleteI agree Jane, it seems there is a common theme tonight.
DeleteAlways ask for joy True — always! 🙂
ReplyDeleteThanks Rob, I will ask for joy and perhaps, I will find pieces of it during the day:)
DeleteWe have a choice on wakening---to be grateful for the good things, or to dwell on the not so good.
ReplyDeleteHi Bev, yes we have a choice but it still can be hard to shake the blues.
DeleteChoose wisely….if you can…
Sing for joy!
ReplyDeleteFirst time I've ever heard that word.
Trying to catch a melody is hard these days.
DeleteThinking of joy means it is on its way!
ReplyDeleteI hope so….
DeleteI really hope morning will bring something better... hope for a lot of joy..
ReplyDeleteCan morning break the mourning silence?
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