Tuesday, December 6, 2022

New Fallin' Snow

courtesy of Pixabay

I've got the cold weather blues
bundling up just to read my email
this heart of mine is feelin' bruised
the winter winds let out a wail

let it go, let it go
let it go, with the new fallin' snow

You know I've been thinking of you
wondering do you still think of me
full cold moon is rising into view
the willow tree now in dormancy

let it go, let it go
let if go, with the new fallin' snow

I've got the cold weather blues
a poetic song, could warm my nights
sing to me about love that's true
let's dance under December starlight

let it go, let it go
let it go, with the new fallin' snow

linking with dVerse
hosted by Lillian - writing poetry
using two winter song titles from
a list provided, I chose the following

Cold Weather Blues (Muddy Waters)
Let It Go (Idina Menzel)

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32 comments:

  1. I like the flow and repetition in this piece. Well written.

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  2. I like what you have done with this poem. The repetition in each stanza works well. It is hard to let go of the winter blues!

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    1. Thank you and yes winter does seem to set a blue mood.

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  3. Wow!!! You nailed this one Trudessa. You poem could be put to music.
    Happy you dropped by my blog

    Much💜love

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  4. That has a beautiful rhythm to it.

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  5. A winter song, and a heart-song. Wonderful.

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    1. Thanks Sherry, hope this finds you in good spirits!

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  6. Love your cold weather blues with it's Let it snow! refrain! And I really like the illustration from pixabay! I use pixabay all the time but have never seen that image. Goes so well with your post!

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    1. Thank you Lillian for hosting! I was able song up some magic.

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  7. You make me want to go out into the snow, raise my arms, and dance!

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  8. Such a lovely rhythm to your cold weather blues!

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    1. Thank you, a hook came to me and off i went.

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  9. This poetic song did warm my heart. Enjoyed the rhythm and repetition of 'let it go...'

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  10. I love the letting go with the new fallen snow concept. Hugs

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  11. This is a song made from songs... very well done.

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  12. I love the idea of getting warm with another, dancing under the winter starlight.

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    1. Thank you! Dancing under moonlight and stars will surely warm the spirit

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  13. Love it. This one strikes a chord, all right. Love the rhythm, the tone of voice, you speaking.

    Pray, why did you delete those excellent poems at my spot? Loved those, too. But when I wanted to comment at my shoe, gone they were.

    Another year's about to say bye
    Time's a-flyin'
    I don't know why.

    Sleep tight.

    Blue

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    1. Hi Blue, imagine my surprise to see a comment from you!

      I did leave you a poem in response to your post but, then I thought perhaps I shouldn’t have spun off your poem.

      I guess, I was just feeling blue, tell me true how are you?

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    2. I'm doing ok. Not great but at least so much better than a year ago. Thank you for asking. Feeling blue I can relate too :)

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    3. Hi Blue - I hope you don't have a blue Christmas! I wish you happiness!

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    4. So nice of you to say that. I had a very peaceful Christmas. It'd been a while. Hope yours was good, too.

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