Thursday, March 9, 2023

Sun, Moon and Earth

Earth, Solar, Sun, Moon, Universe, Space
courtesy of Pixabay


  I.

 Sun father of the universe
giver of luxuriant light
warming hearts in poetic verse
sun father of the universe
today, how far must we traverse
to reach the foothills of twilight
sun father of the universe
giver of luxuriant light

II.

Moon mother of the universe
guardian of nocturnal light
smiling after the clouds disperse
moon mother of the universe
hopeful healing rays when life hurts
wings of heavenly dreams take flight
moon mother of the universe
guardian of nocturnal light

III.

Earth the child of the universe
guiding light of the sun and moon
spinning out of control - a curse?
earth the child of the universe
humans the world is getting worse
open your hearts, sing a new tune
earth the child of the universe
guiding light of the sun and moon

linking with dVerse
hosted by Laura

writing poetry from selected word threesomes

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Light, peace and love always

23 comments:

  1. We have not done well by what nurtures us.

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    1. No we have not, we were given this beautiful planet full of wonders.

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  2. Very pretty reading here, Thank You. I almost chose these three. Sun and Moon, Earth's sun keeps us proper temperature and gives us light, Earth's moon steadies our rhythms, helps our gravities, (their are five major helps). Both are necessary for our way of life.
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    1. Hi Jim the sun and moon are instrumental to life on earth.

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  3. Well done. You have such an affinity with nature and the universe.
    Sandra Cox sandracox.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you Sandra! I feel a connection to the greater forces in the universe. Always gravitating towards the light.

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  4. this was a lovely triolet set - I especially liked how you connected them as family

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    1. Thank you Laura for hosting and the feedback.

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  5. Great rhythm and you connected the three well.

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    1. Thanks Alex. The heavens are amazing

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  6. I wonder if there are any other tiny planets of tiny stars in other galaxies of the universe that have made the same utter balls up of life that we have.

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    1. A good question to ponder. The universe is vast so who knows?

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  7. Rhyming and connecting they relate smoothly as expected of the prompt. Wonderful write, True!

    Hank

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  8. This is beautiful. May earth's children learn that new tune soon.

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    1. I too hope earthling will embrace a new tune quickly.

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  9. Reads like a chant with the rhythm of a song. This is lovely.

    Much💜love

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    1. Thanks Gillena, I hope the song is a catchy one.

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  10. The triolets goes together so well... we have not been good in treating earth given to us.

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    1. Hi Bjorn I think we need to take better care of the earth. Earth gives us so much!

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  11. Truedessa this reads like a prayer and I hope its energy radiates outward to all.

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  12. Love the familial connection between the three. Beautifully expressed. ❤️

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  13. May people wake up and heed your words. Beautiful!

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