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The song, my paddle sings begins slowly
drifting in the morning breeze, freely
turtles basking in autumn’s golden sun
from an oak, a web glistens freshly spun
through the mystical lens one can see
magic resides in the old sycamore tree
perched high an owl, wisdom whispers
yesterday is gone, lost in soft whimpers
Hoo hoo-hooooo
splash, splash, splashing
dip, dip, dipping
murmuring secrets from the river
paddling faster with renewed vigor
each rhythmic stroke a labor of love
a pair of bald eagles soar high above
the song, my paddle sings is stronger
riding the current of rushing water
all around me poetry seems to flow
verses of life seem to come and go
in the wilderness of my beating heart
beneath autumn's canopy, I fall apart
finding harmony in nature’s arms
attracted to all its magical charms
whoosh, whoosh, whooshing
sploosh, sploosh, splooshing
navigating the natural twists and bends
the riverbed provides rest, a place to mend
in my dreams, I’ve seen a sacred place
weaving my thoughts, slowing my pace
the song my paddle sings, is reflective
mighty river baptism, new perspective
steering bravely into uncharted waters
my mantra, enjoy the wonder's life offers
glide, glide, gliding
smile, smile, smiling
Today, I am guest hosting at dVerse exploring the
poetry of E Pauline Johnson "Flint and Feather"
The challenge is to write a poem using "The Song My Paddle Sings"
as a springboard and using her poem as a source of inspiration.
A fresh and exhilarating dip into the waters of song, Truedessa! I love how it begins slowly, ‘drifting in the morning breeze’ and gains momentum through your poem, the use of onomatopoeia and repetition to create atmosphere, and the smile at the end.
ReplyDeleteKim, thank you for your wonderful comment. Smiling is always good at the end of a great river adventure.
DeleteI do love the way you weaved the sound of paddling in that river... that enhances the beauty of the landscape you are showing... thank you for hosting.
ReplyDeleteBjorn - Thank you and the team for having me guest host. I tried to use a rhyming theme much like E Pauline did with hers incorporating some sounds.
DeleteHow lovely. I enjoy the sounds in this poem - they make me smile. The owl hoo hooing, the dipping and splooshing. So enjoyable. Thanks for the great prompt, True.
ReplyDeleteSherry, thanks as always for your support. I loved your poetic song.
DeleteGreat atmosphere created in your poem 🙌
ReplyDeleteThank you much appreciate your reading.
DeleteLove how your verses mirrored the inspired poem. The lens are magical as well as the sounds. Thank you for hosting and reminding us of the gifts of nature.
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace - I do love nature and all that it offers peace and tranquility
DeleteSo lovely, the chorus songs gave enough umph to the poem
ReplyDeleteNice one
Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much♡love
Thank you Gillena - I love the songs of nature
DeleteI'd say you did a tremendous job! And a natural topic for you.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex - Thank you so much for your kind words and your unending support of my creative wanderings.
DeleteOH MY ~~ the rhythm and the energy of your poem literally swept me away ~
ReplyDeleteby the time it ended I had experienced the ride of my life. A huge WOW from Bend Oregon, True.
A huge thank-you Helen - your comment made me smile.
DeleteYou make us see how visually and spiritually nourishing waterways can be, True. Gorgeous, how your paddle sings!
ReplyDeleteDora thank you! Nature has a way of restoring us when we need it most.
DeleteI love the magical and lyrical descriptions - it is full of contentment and wonder - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you Jae, my paddle sings many songs when I am on the water.
DeleteBeautiful images throughout the poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jay
Deletei enjoyed this prompt so much! i love kayaking and the river. and i'm so in-love with your poem and how you captured the magic of paddling, nature, serenity. xx, ren
ReplyDeleteHi Ren, thanks so much! I am happy you enjoyed the prompt.
DeleteHi Ren,
DeleteI couldn't post on your site but, I did read and here are my thoughts
Your paddles sing in lyrical song...my favorite part is the following love all the sounds in this...
paddle sits ‘cross lap,
gentle tap,
bump, slap–
sing me back to now.
I love the rhythm and the rhyme, and I can almost see the canoeist!
ReplyDeleteHi Mary, thanks for stopping by to read :)
DeleteA beautiful poem, Truedessa! ...each rhythmic stroke a labor of love...
ReplyDeleteThis is so true when it comes to paddling on the lake or river!
Dwight - thank you paddling a canoe is indeed a labor of love for nature and the water.
DeleteYour poem is alive with the drumbeat of the river, Truedessa. Your words take us on a glorious and refreshing ride through its beautiful curves. One of my favorites of yours!
ReplyDeleteHi Jennifer, thank you for reading and the wonderful comment. It is appreciated.
DeleteThank you for you inspiring prompt.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem. I am especially drawn to these lines.
in the wilderness of my beating heart
beneath autumn's canopy, I fall apart
finding harmony in nature’s arms
attracted to all its magical charms
You have captured how I experience nature's healing powers.
Thank you Ali - I agree nature is a great healer for the mind, spirit and body. Peace to you!
DeleteSuch a lovely and calming paddle through nature. I enjoyed the song and the rhythms just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteDi - Thank you for listening to the song my paddle sings....
DeleteLOVE this, Truedessa! Such an inspiring write and your paddle sang most beautifully! Thanks for the lovely prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you for joining on the journey.
DeleteAaaaaw, I love your boat and your river, I too have water on my mind.... *smiles*
ReplyDeleteThanks Shadow! Hope the waterways are kind to you.
DeleteLovely imagery. I could hear the water lapping.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra
DeleteHi Truedessa, this is delightfully vivid and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteVivid and present, I was there.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming on the journey.
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