Tuesday, September 30, 2025

Dipping in the Waters of Song

gold-colored boat oar above sea water during golden hour
Courtesy of Unsplashed  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The song, my paddle sings begins slowly
drifting in the morning breeze, freely
turtles basking in autumn’s golden sun
from an oak, a web glistens freshly spun

through the mystical lens one can see
magic resides in the old sycamore tree
perched high an owl, wisdom whispers
yesterday is gone, lost in soft whimpers 

Hoo hoo-hooooo

splash, splash, splashing
    dip, dip, dipping

murmuring secrets from the river
paddling faster with renewed vigor
each rhythmic stroke a labor of love
a pair of  bald eagles soar high above

the song, my paddle sings is stronger
riding the current of rushing water
all around me poetry seems to flow
verses of life seem to come and go

in the wilderness of my beating heart
beneath autumn's canopy, I fall apart
finding harmony in nature’s arms
attracted to all its magical charms
 
whoosh, whoosh, whooshing
        sploosh, sploosh, splooshing

navigating the natural twists and bends
the riverbed provides rest, a place to mend
in my dreams, I’ve seen a sacred place
weaving my thoughts, slowing my pace

the song my paddle sings, is reflective
mighty river baptism, new perspective
steering bravely into uncharted waters
my mantra, enjoy the wonder's life offers

glide, glide, gliding
smile, smile, smiling

Today,  I am guest hosting at dVerse exploring the 
poetry of E Pauline Johnson "Flint and Feather"

The challenge is to write a poem using "The Song My Paddle Sings"
as a springboard and using her poem as a source of inspiration.

45 comments:

  1. A fresh and exhilarating dip into the waters of song, Truedessa! I love how it begins slowly, ‘drifting in the morning breeze’ and gains momentum through your poem, the use of onomatopoeia and repetition to create atmosphere, and the smile at the end.

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    1. Kim, thank you for your wonderful comment. Smiling is always good at the end of a great river adventure.

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  2. I do love the way you weaved the sound of paddling in that river... that enhances the beauty of the landscape you are showing... thank you for hosting.

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    1. Bjorn - Thank you and the team for having me guest host. I tried to use a rhyming theme much like E Pauline did with hers incorporating some sounds.

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  3. How lovely. I enjoy the sounds in this poem - they make me smile. The owl hoo hooing, the dipping and splooshing. So enjoyable. Thanks for the great prompt, True.

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    1. Sherry, thanks as always for your support. I loved your poetic song.

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  4. Great atmosphere created in your poem 🙌

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    1. Thank you much appreciate your reading.

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  5. Love how your verses mirrored the inspired poem. The lens are magical as well as the sounds. Thank you for hosting and reminding us of the gifts of nature.

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    1. Thank you Grace - I do love nature and all that it offers peace and tranquility

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  6. So lovely, the chorus songs gave enough umph to the poem
    Nice one
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much♡love

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    1. Thank you Gillena - I love the songs of nature

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  7. I'd say you did a tremendous job! And a natural topic for you.

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    1. Hi Alex - Thank you so much for your kind words and your unending support of my creative wanderings.

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  8. OH MY ~~ the rhythm and the energy of your poem literally swept me away ~
    by the time it ended I had experienced the ride of my life. A huge WOW from Bend Oregon, True.

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    1. A huge thank-you Helen - your comment made me smile.

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  9. You make us see how visually and spiritually nourishing waterways can be, True. Gorgeous, how your paddle sings!

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    1. Dora thank you! Nature has a way of restoring us when we need it most.

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  10. I love the magical and lyrical descriptions - it is full of contentment and wonder - Jae

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    1. Thank you Jae, my paddle sings many songs when I am on the water.

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  11. Beautiful images throughout the poem.

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  12. i enjoyed this prompt so much! i love kayaking and the river. and i'm so in-love with your poem and how you captured the magic of paddling, nature, serenity. xx, ren

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    1. Hi Ren, thanks so much! I am happy you enjoyed the prompt.

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    2. Hi Ren,

      I couldn't post on your site but, I did read and here are my thoughts

      Your paddles sing in lyrical song...my favorite part is the following love all the sounds in this...

      paddle sits ‘cross lap,
      gentle tap,
      bump, slap–
      sing me back to now.

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  13. I love the rhythm and the rhyme, and I can almost see the canoeist!

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    1. Hi Mary, thanks for stopping by to read :)

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  14. A beautiful poem, Truedessa! ...each rhythmic stroke a labor of love...
    This is so true when it comes to paddling on the lake or river!

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    1. Dwight - thank you paddling a canoe is indeed a labor of love for nature and the water.

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  15. Your poem is alive with the drumbeat of the river, Truedessa. Your words take us on a glorious and refreshing ride through its beautiful curves. One of my favorites of yours!

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    1. Hi Jennifer, thank you for reading and the wonderful comment. It is appreciated.

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  16. Thank you for you inspiring prompt.

    What a lovely poem. I am especially drawn to these lines.

    in the wilderness of my beating heart
    beneath autumn's canopy, I fall apart
    finding harmony in nature’s arms
    attracted to all its magical charms

    You have captured how I experience nature's healing powers.

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    1. Thank you Ali - I agree nature is a great healer for the mind, spirit and body. Peace to you!

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  17. Such a lovely and calming paddle through nature. I enjoyed the song and the rhythms just beautiful.

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    1. Di - Thank you for listening to the song my paddle sings....

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  18. LOVE this, Truedessa! Such an inspiring write and your paddle sang most beautifully! Thanks for the lovely prompt.

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    1. Thank you for joining on the journey.

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  19. Aaaaaw, I love your boat and your river, I too have water on my mind.... *smiles*

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    1. Thanks Shadow! Hope the waterways are kind to you.

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  20. Lovely imagery. I could hear the water lapping.

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  21. Hi Truedessa, this is delightfully vivid and beautiful.

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  22. Vivid and present, I was there.

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