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Stormy sky becomes less darkle
autumn sunlight sparkles
walking amongst golden trees
palpable tension in the air eases
leaves crunching under her feet
feeling mother earth's heartbeat
there's an aura of magical splendor
into the limbs of nature she surrenders
embracing falls sparkling light
written for dVerse - Quadrille 234
Writing a 44 word quadrille incorporating
sparkler or a form of spark hosted by Punam
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Truedessa I love the darkle-sparkle rhyme. Also like the idea of surrending to nature.
ReplyDeleteI love your joyful word play - as satisfying as stepping on a crisp, fallen leaf - Jae
ReplyDeleteYour title hooked me right in! Very visual words. :D
ReplyDeleteI love the rhyme in the first couplet. It’s so much fun. Fooling around with how words are constructed is exactly what we need to be doing as poets.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the wordplay and rhymes in your quadrille, Truedessa, the use of darkness and light, and the sound in the couplet:
ReplyDelete‘leaves crunching under her feet
feeling mother earth's heartbeat’.
Love it especially "there's an aura of magical splendor
ReplyDeleteinto the limbs of nature she surrenders"